I LAUGHED SO HARD! But not as hard as poor Tayuya. This was seriously hilarious! But...ten year olds don't act like that! I was 10 three years ago and I'm still the same!
Erica: No, actually I think you got worse...
Me: NUH UH! *throws a fit*

O my goodness gracious! This was just so special, and amazing! I spent the entire time I read it giggling maniacally. I love how you make the Sound ninja completely useless (because they kind of are...).

" "How the hell did you get in here this time?"
"Window!" Moegi pointed to the now shattered living room window. "

I love this line; I can see Moegi smiling as she points to the window.

I only have one criticism: some of your sentences are a bit short; semicolons are our friends. They can work wonders for flow.

This is just brilliant. Tayuya's reaction cracked me up.

This was the funniest, most random, cute thing I have ever read!

I love you.

OrochiMoegi is my OTP, and has been for the last year. This is awesome. 230948234 out of 10

Lmao. Nice humorous fic. :D

XD This was hilarious! Rather than be disturbed, I am feeling quite amused. I would love to see a continuation of this when she is older, haha.

This is too funny, I love the part about tayuya, lol

Oh, my God! The crack pairing to lord over all crack pairings! I salute you!

Alright, that was hilariously funny. I was laughing the entire time! Haha, I love Orochimaru's view on how evil Moegi is. Tayuya in this was funny too. But I agree with her- that IS disturbing, but it was still awesome. I hope you write more stories like this one!

XD

-dies- You. Are. Fucking. Amazing. I think you'rethe only one who could pull this off so well!

...BWAHAHAHAHAHAH MOEGI AND OROCHI? That was pure comical genius! FAVORITE now!

Hehehehehe.

OMG. This is such a cracky pairing. I LOVE IT! LOL, good job.

rofl...genius. good fanfiction.