AHH HAHA
i loved it it was hillarious!!

lol i love to see namine try to play the tambourine

“And stay away from Riku, I think he’s confused with his sexuality!” HAHAHAHAHAH i thought this was really funy

the conversation with kairi's mom was the best!!
i hinted at a little of your own life thrown in at this part.
oh yeah lmaorofl FISHERMAN? lol
very funny
keep up the fantastic creativity!

Kudos for another good chapter!

Poor Sora, Riku was being really shallow, asking Kairi when he knew full well Sora was going to ask her.

Kairi's mom was very real. I'm glad she wasn't like "You're going to France with two boys? Okay, don't come back pregnant!" She was actually a parent and I love her comments about Riku and Sora.

Namine has entered the scene! Yay! She's cool.

Good work!

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I love Roxas in this chapter! He was so great!

Poor Tifa, stuck with the Organization for company. Axel's really being an **.

Good chapter, keep it up!

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haha rikus confuzzeled
it's going really good
update soon!
-jade

Heh heh, yeah, poor Kairi she has to be stuck with such a paranoid mother. Also,poor Sora, nothing seems to be going right for him, huh? Bad Riku, stealing Sora's girl. lol XD

Keep up the good work!

Kairi's mom is creepy...

Holy crap, that was so good. I really like the flow of the chapter and how you made Kairi's mom all paranoid and whatnot. It was so funny with the conversation they had in the end! I really liked it! So awesome. Update soon, ok? I really like the story so far =]

Interesting update. ^_^
I love Kairi's mom. XD

Ya don't say, I am absolutely following every chapter of this fanfic...

Though, I still hoped that you would've put a bit o' supernatural in this story.

[Roxas was the first to volunteer as Kairi. “I’ll be Kairi!” He brought about his own cell phone and waited for Sora to get his out. Stepping back, he stayed still until Sora opened his phone.

Here I go.

“Ring, ring, ring” Sora imitated the phone as he stared at Roxas looking at himself in the mirror that hung loosely on the door. “I said ‘Ring, ring, ring!’”

In a very high-pitched girly voice, Roxas spoke into his phone. “Hello?” He pretended to put on an imaginary lip gloss as he talked, glaring at his reflection.

Rolling his eyes, Sora talked back. “Hey Kairi! It’s Sora.”

“Oh my God! Sora?! No way!” he exclaimed in his girly tone. “Hold on!”

Roxas made a pretend phone with his free hand and squealed, “Naminé, Ollete, Selphie! Sora is on the other line! Isn’t he so fine? He’s like the hottest thing I have ever seen in my life! Ok bye!”

Sora’s mouth was open wide, not understanding the craziness he was witnessing. Roxas switched to his cell phone and resumed the imitation. “So, Sora, what did you want to talk about?” Roxas paced himself across the room and to one of the open windows as he peered over at the dim lighted pool in the backyard.

“Will you go to the dance with me?” Sure, it was easy to ask the fake ‘Kairi’ the question, but would he be able to ask her in person? “I would really like for you to go with me.”

Roxas snorted inappropriately. “Of course not! I am going with Roxas. Sorry!” Roxas closed his phone, turned around and smiled at Sora joyfully.

“Idiot. You’re useless…” Sighing disappointedly, Sora threw his shoe at his cousin, but missed. ]


Lol I loved that part laugh.gif

I'll be waiting for the next chapter

man, that was soo good, but it sucks that Axel and Sora r drug dealers. And that's cool that u made Roxas Sora's cousin. wub.gif

wow if cloud shows up axel is going to get knocked out dirty dang

I just finished reading this... Its interesting stuff. ^_^

man that is so freaking awesome it has a good storyline i wonder how they are going to get Axel a date with Tifa? HM

Nice that was a good read. Is Org XI like a fraternity? LOL