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101spacemonkey
2008-05-18
ch 21,
abusethe title of this chapter, is a nice contrast.

shadow greg is a little scary, but for me not overly, horror movies actually bore me senseless, ive been numbed by society!

anyway, granted the months in which greg returned to his almost true form did fly past in a few lines, but i think it was better than dragging it out...

nice ending, wb! (i love reviews of my reviews - call me a review fanatic!)
101spacemonkey
2008-05-18
ch 20,
abusenice funeral and nice chat about buried alive...

btw i dont think i mentioned that i liked the grim reaper bits from earlier
101spacemonkey
2008-05-18
ch 19,
abusei loved all the neutron jokes, were they this chapter or the last, no i think they were the last, needless to cay my chemistry teacher will never hear the end of it.

anyway i love the fact that the team are tlaking, adn all these snippets that involve greg and the others...


hehe he has the flu, poor greg, it really hasnt been his last 2 months has it!

anyway, gregs mum is dead protective and is in denial... oh well
101spacemonkey
2008-05-18
ch 17,
abusenice greg and hodge interaction


those poor people in the basement, that is sucha cruel way to die. morgan is a fundamentalist, blinded by his belief in what is good and evil, unable to see that his morals have been twisted and corrupted.
101spacemonkey
2008-05-18
ch 16,
abuseim back!


im surprised warrick didnt cotton on to gregs behaviour, and realise a bit more... anyway

im glad agent morgan is going to answer questions, well i hope he is
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 15,
abusethat was adorabel, i have gtg now as it is about 4.10 in the morning, and well im going to have to get sleep and wake up in a few hours, so if possible can you please pm me about this fic, im a smidge worried i might forget about it, mind you that is a hard thing to do.

oh btw, maybe its just me, but i dont think this needed the warning at the start of it.

ciao 4 now
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 14,
abusethat was adorable, i wonder what will happen when he tellsthe rest of the team, sara now has a good idea.

however how can he explain this all to a shrink without seeming mad, considering the government will deny all that happned, he has his injuries, but thats it...
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 13,
abusei loved this chapter, all the humour and the flashback. and the fact that he will open up, also i liked the chat that sara and grissom had, as well as the old lady who told greg to stop hiding, beautiful!
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 12,
abusethat was a brilliant chapter, i liked how the team had divided over this, and how they all reacted to his return, i also loved the humour in it all despite everything, and how they werent too probing as to what happened, as im sure all will be revealed.

there is more i want to say, but as usual the fact that the next chapter exists has me a little distracted


btw greg does need a hospital, but i can overlook that, as the team are bound to know enough about medicine to help him, and besides a hospital visit will raise too many questions
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 11,
abusehe finally made it home, i was waiting for the taxi to be a fraud!

i cant wait to see the teams reactions
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 10,
abusenow this is revelaing, i like this, it shows so much...

so basically this means greg will escape soon enough and all will be well, right?

well to an extent, he will need the team to help him, however i wonder how long it has been since all this happened... well started is a more appropriate word.

so wesley is destined to die for revelaing the truth, much like mark, and maybe in a similar way, i guess he is looking after marks family, even if his recent treatment of greg doesnt really tally with that
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 9,
abusei kind of had hoped his escape would be that easy, but this is bound to be the rat, who will let him escpae out of loyalty to gregs father, right?
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 8,
abusedid he just eat a cockroach!

well i knew it was coming due to the A/N but still, woah

ew

hang on the pet clinic is real? maybe ive missed something, it is late and all, then again, maybe im just assuming its real and its a cover story, but didnt he mention this one in his note, and therefore how did he know to go there? ok ive definately missed something - sigh -

yeah he hadnt wanted to know his name, i wonder what is in his hand, maybe its a note telling him about his father, then again, this could be some weird test (i mean that in relation to the endurance test aka whump greg is under)

yep i so speculated way off the cliff.
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 7,
abusei like his breadcrumbs... i wonder if the team are following them

scary thing is i deciphered the note, granted im seeing it from gregs pov, but still, nice code, poncho, eh go nick!
101spacemonkey
2008-05-17
ch 6,
abuseit landed heads right?

its bound to have, that whole white light thing is greg going back to reality and not him wlaking to the light.
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