Reviews for Dealings of the Heart

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smile-maker 2008-04-10 ch 5,	abuseReally good story! I like it, so far so good, although I am angry towards Harris... smile But Jack is going to die when he sees Elli with Jeff at the festival. Please update soon! :)
Momo-chan12 2008-01-12 ch 5,	abuseWoo,you updated! I was looking forward to reading this! Aw, Elli still has feelings for Jack even though she tries to hide it. Ahh, the suspense...whats going to happen at the Fireworks Festival?! I wonder what will happen when Harris heads to the Mountain, what will he do? I'm psyched to read more and update as if your life depended on it lol jk. Great work and cya later!
Blue Toad 2008-01-10 ch 1,	abuseThat was really good! It was nice that Jeff felt a twinge of jealously to their love...I'm not sure if it was displayed in Harvest Moon 64. I never played it. Sobs I really liked the date bit. It sounded so real and emotional! There's nothing I can really suggest for improvements...you have some great skills and potential! Good luck on this!
MyShadowsThorn 2008-01-08 ch 5,	abuseWell you're having Jack wait until the fireworks festival to give Elli a gift...I just see this ending badly for some reason like she'll end up being there with Jeff or something... Anyways though I really do look forward to what's up next - can't wait ^_^
roxas-kh 2008-01-08 ch 5,	abuseGood as always! Hopefully we can get the next one up quicker! Ja ne.
Moonlit Dreaming 2008-01-08 ch 5,	abuseYay, you updated! I was looking forward to this. ^^ I really enjoyed this chapter. It was fun and it set up the next one perfectly. I'll be waiting for your next update. Cya then!
Baby bear 2008-01-08 ch 5, anon.	abuseUpdate now please for the love of everthing good I love this story cliffhangers are evil please continue must now what happen's.Your awesome.Don't stop your finally getting there.Read this story so long ago been longing for it to be updated you wrote some but you have to do just a little more for now so we can know if Elli finds out the truth and gets back with Jack.PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE WITH EXTRA CHEESE.
Muu-chan 2007-09-16 ch 4,	abuseOh, Elli's got something up her sleeve! I can't wait to find out what Jack's reaction will be. I love this. Update soon!
Moonlit Dreaming 2007-09-05 ch 4,	abusePoor Jack! He's not going to be happy when he finds out about Elli and Jeff. Though judging from what Elli was thinking at the end, it seems like she wants to get Jack jealous more than anything else... Overall, it was another good chapter, if a little bit short. I can't wait to see what Popuri and Ann are planning though. Update soon!
Momo-chan12 2007-09-04 ch 4,	abuseYAY you updated!!I was so excited about reading the next chapter,and Im so glad you both updated!^__^ I loved the chapter!uh-oh,now Jeff is going with Elli to the fireworks festival no!This cant be happening(sniff)Kyaa,now its really getting so good,ooh poor Jack he'll be so sad when he finds out that Jeff and Elli are together.I just love how this is going and this was an excellent chapter and worth the wait!Ahh,no not the cliffhanger now Im even more psyched about the next chapter,have mercy lol and update soon!I love this story and I cant wait to see what happens at the festival,good luck and cya next chapter!
Ultra Drama Queen 2007-09-04 ch 4,	abuse"Elli smiles and happily returns to her cake. "Let's see what Jack think's about this." She muses to herself as she ices the cake." Dude, this seemes like Elli is trying to make Jack jealous! Why, why must you tourture us so! GET THEM TOGETHER AGAIN! WA! Ok, I'm good now. You know what, I'm giving you a standing ovasion for this chapter. It was so... fluffy, and romantic, and lot's of Girlyness. No joke, since I'm a girl, I could so tell there was girl power in the part with Popuri and Ann helping Jack. Plus, I only saw a tiny bit of error, not a thing to worry about, I only saw it coz i have great vision, eye's of steel (wait, I wouldn't be able to see anything then...) Anyways, kudo's (most likely screwed the spelling) for this chapter you guys! Yay you! Ok, bye now!
Momo-chan12 2007-08-07 ch 3,	abuseyah,this is so awesome!Now its really getting exciting!^^oh,Jeff's really acting evil,but I guess he's only doing that because he loves elli.no,Jack needs to be with Elli!I hope that elli realizes the truth soon.kya,I just love this story know!!I read it many times already and I always enjoy reading it!I hope you update soon,lol I cant take the torture!ok,cya next chapter and keep up the great work!
Momo-chan12 2007-08-07 ch 2,	abuseYah,another great chapter!I like this story so much now,lol even more than sweets!(gasps)oh poor Elli,aww she must feel so hurt seeing Jack kissing Ann,it must feel terrible.How will Jack explain this to her and will she believe him?!oh,this is getting really intresting,I cant wait to read more!yay you both for writing very well,you really know how to draw the reader in!
Momo-chan12 2007-08-07 ch 1,	abuseKYaa,I absolutely love this!!Im so hooked on it!^__^yay Im so glad this is a JackxElli story,I love stories about them!!This was such a awesome chapter,it was written well and I had fun reading it.ooh,I bet this is gonna rock I just know that this will be an awesome story to read,lol Im psychic.I like how you add Jeff's thoughts as well,that progresses the story to what will happen next.I like the description and everything about this!wait to go,you guys are both very good writers,keep up the super work!cya next chapter
Ultra Drama Queen 2007-07-31 ch 3,	abuseYay, good story! Good story! I like this chapter. Jeeze, Jeff is a bag now... why is it in all the stories I read, there is someone who has to be a bag? Well, whatever! Good chappie, ok, not gonna go overboard with review, have lotza stories to read, seeing as i just got back from camping! Ok, bye! update soon!

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