loved it. make another chap.

What is Tala doing there? Isn't he supposed to be in Russia ;)? I hope he doesn't like Hilary, 'cause she should be with Kai ^^. Yeah, they are my favourite Beyblade couple xD.
I can't wait to see next chapter >.

Kick ass! And whats the deal with Tala? Trying to get Kai back? OMG!! WHAT IF TALA LIKES HILARY O_O

HOLY SHIT! EPIC LOVE XD

Update ASAP!

Thanks!

om my fucking gosh! pelase updatre!

really cant wait till u update!

plez update soon and make it a bit more romantic

Awesome chapter. Please update. GOing so good.

smooth story line. pleaz keep on ritin i want more of the story !

please, the next chapter

this is awesome! I like the way you make Hilary seem to think that she is invisable... well I guess kai is gonna change that later.. great jobb

good as always, Miss. George.
yes, yes, Hilary you are
xoxox

hey that was nice.. kai being all concerned and defensive about hil.. hehe... plzz continue...

Hurry up Hurry up

Plz update ASAP

WHoo! Update pleaz!
awesome story!

i like this story please update soon (: