You've distinguished the characters very well, and you've also delineated their emotions seamlessly. Quite impressive.

I love the banter between the characters.

You're a really great writer.

And I absolutely love that you proofread your work before posting it. It's such a rarity to find a story that's not only good, but that has correct grammar and spelling, too.

Keep up the good work!

I know I said I wasn't going to read this since I'm unfamiliar with the show, but... well, I lied. I couldn't resist; I'm too big of a fan.

This is off to a nice start. The dialogue is colloquial and flows well. Nice work.