|Reviews for Master of Puppets, Demolition Chief|
| Kage ni kakusa reta Enjeru 5/23/13 . chapter 6
the title of this chapter is from tropic thunder
| The Man 5/7/13 . chapter 6
I felt that after the last chapter, you just gave up on this making sense.
| Darkth Shadow 5/7/13 . chapter 5
selection 2 plz
| KyuubiNaruto4444 2/22/13 . chapter 8
when is the next update going to be this story is awesome
| Kingdark 2/3/13 . chapter 2
"YATTA!" He shouted, jumping for joy. I actually think that 'for' should be 'with' as in 'jumping with joy' or rather, if you replace joy with happiness you could use: jumping with happiness. I think. Now I'm having second doubts myself...
What the hell does '"Hisashiburi dana, ne Ojiisan?" mean exactly?
| Kingdark 2/3/13 . chapter 1
I don't know how useful this is going to be, but I would advise to not use Japanese if you can help it. Certainly, stuff like -san, -kun and that stuff is acceptable. Major techniques like Kage bunshin are acceptable too, but I know for a fact that Urucee is spelled wrongly.
Actually, I don't mind the use of Japanese as long as the author does proper research.
I don't know the correct version of urucee myself but I do know that it's wrong.
| Eagle12 2/1/13 . chapter 6
Dude just epic hope you update it soon
| GoldenDragon14 1/31/13 . chapter 8
I certainly liked Sasuke being beaten. But about Sarabi, she just seems like a Mary Sue overpowered bitch. She's just a little too strong.
| JashinsPriestess42 1/9/13 . chapter 4
OH MY GOD! HILARIOUS! I was laughing my ass off when I read about them all getting high! SOOOO FUNNY!
| 1sunfun 1/6/13 . chapter 8
| FollieOfMadness 12/3/12 . chapter 3
Ocean's twelve. Ocean's twelve. OCEAN'S TWELVE. YOU USED A SCENE FROM OCEAN'S TWELVE?!
...I love you now and forever.
| FollieOfMadness 12/3/12 . chapter 2
WHAT THE FU- BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM.
| FollieOfMadness 12/3/12 . chapter 1
NIGGA GAVE ME SUPERPOWERS (SORT OF). That and this is pretty interesting.
| erching 11/28/12 . chapter 8
i really hope you continue
| Akuma-Heika 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Urucee, Sasori! I will be able to teach him stuff.
Urusai is how it is spelled in romanji.
Iwagakure no Deidara (Deidara of the Hidden Rocks
Might I suggest changing it to Bakuiwa no Deidara (Deidara of the Explosive Rocks)?