the title of this chapter is from tropic thunder

I felt that after the last chapter, you just gave up on this making sense.

selection 2 plz

when is the next update going to be this story is awesome

"YATTA!" He shouted, jumping for joy. I actually think that 'for' should be 'with' as in 'jumping with joy' or rather, if you replace joy with happiness you could use: jumping with happiness. I think. Now I'm having second doubts myself...

What the hell does '"Hisashiburi dana, ne Ojiisan?" mean exactly?

I don't know how useful this is going to be, but I would advise to not use Japanese if you can help it. Certainly, stuff like -san, -kun and that stuff is acceptable. Major techniques like Kage bunshin are acceptable too, but I know for a fact that Urucee is spelled wrongly.

Actually, I don't mind the use of Japanese as long as the author does proper research.

I don't know the correct version of urucee myself but I do know that it's wrong.

Dude just epic hope you update it soon

I certainly liked Sasuke being beaten. But about Sarabi, she just seems like a Mary Sue overpowered bitch. She's just a little too strong.

OH MY GOD! HILARIOUS! I was laughing my ass off when I read about them all getting high! SOOOO FUNNY!

Nice.

Ocean's twelve. Ocean's twelve. OCEAN'S TWELVE. YOU USED A SCENE FROM OCEAN'S TWELVE?!
...I love you now and forever.

WHAT THE FU- BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM.

NIGGA GAVE ME SUPERPOWERS (SORT OF). That and this is pretty interesting.

i really hope you continue

Urucee, Sasori! I will be able to teach him stuff.
Urusai is how it is spelled in romanji.

Iwagakure no Deidara (Deidara of the Hidden Rocks
Might I suggest changing it to Bakuiwa no Deidara (Deidara of the Explosive Rocks)?

interesting story.