Very haunting, in a soulful way.

This is a Awsome story and I love it but it's also very sad...if I was himeko I wouldn't want to forget cause I would never be able to forgive myself

good story. its been a while since i saw such an ending for KnM. A sober, sad ending instead of the usual happy one. Please write some more, looking forward to your works

Very haunting, and very well written.

Although, it wasn't a flute. It was a sheathed knife. The tanto Chikane acutally used in her fight against Tsubasa.

But yeah, those last lines were particualarly haunting. Well done. :)

So beautifully written that it sounded like a poem. Keep writing. Aloneness

I think I need to find out more about this fandom. You make it sound fantastic and angsty, which is totally irresistible to me. *_*

Very beautifully written. Your words and expressions have a refreshing poetic feel to them, and the story itself has the perfect amount of angst in my opinion. It left me with many emotions at the end, and that's the kind of story I like. Bravo.

What a sad story. I hope U write another one. :)