| Reviews for She LOVES ME? |
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Salestia 7/6/07 . chapter 6 don't be silly! i adore these chapters! i live for them! maybe lila enters the picture? |
acosta perez jose ramiro 7/6/07 . chapter 6Great chapter! Yeah, Arnold hates violence, but I'm sure hates even more when someone messes with his friends. Keep the good writing. |
MickeyLuv 7/6/07 . chapter 6wow. Arnold kicked some butt. That was awesome. |
Nintendo Queen 7/6/07 . chapter 6 DUDE! That was so awesome. You did a great job getting everyone into character! I loved it! |
The J.A.M. a.k.a. Numbuh i 7/6/07 . chapter 6Excellent! You know, I wonder why he never used karate to defend himself when Wolfgang and Torvald ganged up on them... |
Jatieluv 7/6/07 . chapter 6aw that was so cute...he was protecting her. i think sum1 is starting 2 get feelingz 4 a certain sum1 lolz! ud soon please |
Sokai 7/4/07 . chapter 3Now THAT was absolutely adorable, I swear TO God. LoL Sorry. _' Just that I've always loved this show ever since it first came out when I was a kid (I'm 23 now), and always-ALWAYS (sadly) related to Helga with the whole digging on someone who doesn't notice, but sometimes you two share "moments" that give you hope RIGHT when you feel you should just quit. _ LoL But now it's okay because I'm engaged so yeah. LoL ANYWAY. I've read a lot of HA! fics in the past, and most of them ruin the show's premise and characters by changing their personalities entirely or making one or all of them pregnant at like age 13 or the ever-popular 16. Can't stand that (since, to me, that sends a wrong message to the younger readers on here). Just keep the story simple, fluff and eventual happy ending. And SO far you seem to be doing that, which is an enjoyable sight. :) Keep it going, and congrats on all of the support. _ |
Callnowia 7/4/07 . chapter 5I think I liked this chapter the best... everyone has gotten in character and the story feels llike it's getting somewhere. I really wish you'd make actual chapters instead of just dividing up the scenes and CALLING them chapters... but it's no biggie. However when you're writing, think about that it's "YOU'RE" not your. If it's a bad habit to spell it your, start writing you are instead... it's a quite annoying error, easy to let it slide when it happens once in a while... but I haven't seen a single "you're" anywhere throughout the story so far... okay, still, I'm having fun reading this! Awaiting the next chapter |
Healing Sword 7/1/07 . chapter 5Like always say Great Chap! :3 continue it soon (I'm Tired that's why I wrote a few words tururur xD) bye take care Atte: Healing Sword |
Seto's Princess 7/1/07 . chapter 5aw... that was really sweet! yay Arnold! |
Houkanno Yuuhou 7/1/07 . chapter 5No, the chapter didn't "suck". I just wish they were longer, but I'll live. :) |
DeepVoice'06 7/1/07 . chapter 5Aw, the chapter didn't suck. It was cute. :) Heh, I love this line: “Come on Helga, you never fought with me when I offered you my gram crackers, why are you fighting with me now?”..LOL! |
Jatieluv 7/1/07 . chapter 5this chapter didn't suck. it was really cute and sweet! i can't wait 4 the next 1! |
MickeyLuv 7/1/07 . chapter 5It didn't suck it showed at the beginning that Helga isn't a total bitch, but then it showed what happens when you get on her bad side. Anywho. Good Job ku. Update soon |
Nintendo Queen 7/1/07 . chapter 5IT DID NOT SUCK! In fact, Helga's temper made it seem so much more like the show. I had the moment perfect in my head. It was brilliant and you'd BETTER update |