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Tanigi 3/7/11 . chapter 1
YAY.

So good.

I love non-angsty Ootori family fics, and this one was great. :D Loved how you used the oldest brother's POV(can't for the life of me think of what his name might be), and I loved the dynamic that you gave them.

Thanks for a great fic!
KatelySmiling 2/1/11 . chapter 1
that was really good and its informitive
Wednesday1990 8/25/10 . chapter 1
Pretty freaking awesome. I really do love this!
Buzzbug82 3/13/10 . chapter 1
Wow. This is wonderfully made. I'm starting to get in the mood of knowing Kyouya's family better. And mommy and daddy would always be mommy and daddy. Can't marry your own daughter.
VanillaSlash 3/9/10 . chapter 1
Kyoya's older brother realizing that his younger sibling has become the 'mother' of childred (and 'wife' of Tamaki) was just about the funniest expression to imagine ever! XD Also, the older brother being jealous of Kyoya having such a true friend was really very sweet. I loved this POV-very creative!
Potpourrii 12/21/09 . chapter 1
Wow! Very, extremely, utterly unique!

I'm speechless, really!
blueyblonde 12/11/09 . chapter 1
i love it
Malfoy's Kitten 9/3/09 . chapter 1
love it
Fairies-Are-Real 8/30/09 . chapter 1
Brilliant story! I LOVED the ending, I always wondered if there would be a confrontation type thing between kyouya and his father and this was wonderful! You chould definatly write more stories like this!

Fairy )
brakken 8/19/09 . chapter 1
M...very good indeed. You do a very good job of capturing the tone of frigid, economic ambition that coats every aspect of the Ootori's lives and defines their characters-especially this older brother. I always felt it a shame in the manga that so little was said about them. I think they provide an entirely different and worthwhile perspective to the rest of the story, as well as adding some lines of their own-and you've proved it well. My only complaint would be that the description of the elder brother's reaction to Tamaki's piano playing seemed overdone. But then again, if this was his first time enjoying music...who knows? I would have done it differently, and I get somewhat annoyed when things are so completely positive or negative, but it was well written and I can see arguments in its favor. *shrugs* It's a good fic, any way you look about it though. Good job.
RandomDream 4/25/09 . chapter 1
Cool :) Another perspective. You've done it well, though I'd like to see the reaction of the brother when he meets Haruhi for the first time.

Keep it up! Thanks.
master of toast 9/9/08 . chapter 1
holy crap this is like the best fanfic ever!
PaolaAdara 4/2/08 . chapter 1
oh my god.

that was exactly what went through my head (and what i actually blurted out) after reading this. not the usual omg's i've been saying left and right recently, but "oh my god." this fic was just superbly written, and the words and the image they carried just flowed so smoothly!

all the references to kyoya's friendship with tamaki were golden, and i especially liked the part where the brother found out when K.O. first popped up, which was when tamaki first visited their home. that was like the event that made tamaki and kyoya inseparable!

haha, it's funny...i can't stop smiling. this was just too good, and the genre isn't even what i usually read! you keep up the good work. (good? that's an understatement!)
Kuma-cchi 3/20/08 . chapter 1
I know I know I've practically reviewed all your stories and it's probably getting annoying, but hey I had free time so I'm checking out a few good authors.

This certainly was interesting. Well written, in-character, and original. Good to see something different from the usual romance and angst. Kudos.
niver 12/31/07 . chapter 1
That was amazing. Such an interesting perspective, and it covered everything so well.
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