Duh duh duh someone is in deep shit good thing Davir is a one you call from another country other wise they'd probably just run him through.

I loved it! Wonderful!

First off I noticed a typo, just so you're aware; "a throne waited for him, and Shnag’s hard road for her."

I really enjoyed reading this chapter.

I think you captured something of the caged animal in Pip and Roald, though I have to admit that I think any relationship between them that is more than friendship will be a difficult and dangerous path. I'm curious to see if it will work out or not, and if it will be what they want in the end.

Also I loved the moment between Ryan and Kel. It was pure magic.

OMG! I can't believe you just stopped it right there! And thanks for the Kel/Ryan fluff, and even some Roald/Pip fluff (even though I do like Shinko). Udpate speedy quick!

Sarah

I love this story! This chapter is without doubt my all time favorite. Poor Andrea, I wish her and Ryan would get together... or maybe, Iceblood? Does he look like Johnny Depp -Iceblood I mean-? That's kind of what pictured him to look like for some reason, lol. Ne ways I can't wait until your next update! -Alecia.

Excellent! Loved it!

I'm speechless.

Utterly.

That was so...good!

Waiting for more

Ky

in your summery I think you meant 03-08-08 not 08-03-08

Wicked Chapter!

This is the most absolutely best story ever! I love how you started with the battle between Pip and Stormwing because it got me totally hooked. The legend about the Phoenix is the best. The story fits together so perfectly (Raoul fighting the shadow dogs the Phoenix fighting them, the chamber Phoenix's lover, the ban on nobles the Phoenix, etc) the story is so well mapped out, it's practically professional! Too bad this is fan fiction or it could be published. I feel like I know all the characters. I'm ranting, I know, but I LOVE this story! I'm glad you said you'd finish it no matter what, because I'll read it all the way to the end!

Echo

Wow. Just wow. That was a fantastic chapter. I loved the way you captured the moments.

ooh! now both kally and pip are outside! who will the monster choose. or will he take both! i like it! keep it up! i can't wait to read the next chapter!

Even though this chapter was so incredibly long it felt too incredibly short. :( LOL. I wish you would have added some actual Kel/Ryan fluff. Sure we could have guessed at what happened, but knowing is always better. :)

Kally's not even in the purple dress is she? It's someone else. I think Kel and Ryan should sneak into the ball. I can't wait until Kel and Iceblood meet. Update soon.

Sarah

I went to my e-mail, saw there was a new chapter and started jumping up and down! YAY! I loved this chapter, Kalasin's plan was great, but now the beast has her(?) I'm glad Kel is back, I hope she can help Ryan. I loved the interactions between Davir and Pip, then Pip and Roald. I also liked the fight between Davir and Eve, that was awesome. Last chapter I loved the interaction between Andi and Davir, it cracked me up, poor Andi.. There wasn't much Andrea in this chapter also, I missed her. I can't wait until March 25th!

Once again, I absolutely adore this chapter! Your writing is extremely captivating and you manage to portray your characters really distinctly. Anyway, good job and hope to see another chapter soon!