Very, very good. Hope you can continue this.

This is certainly entertaining. :D The plot is well though out and runs smoothly. Your writing is exceptional and it's really interesting! ^-^

~Skylaar Wolf

don't tell me shady IS a god and is gonna do vivian.
ah suspense! i hate you! please update son

that last bit was brilliant.
no criticism for this one, it was excellent!
love the plot, and you make it feel relateable the "will the kids like me?" part that everyone feels. i love it! I'm so glad I found this fic.

I like your story so far and I am looking forward to a new chapter. Please update again soon!! ;)

it good but revise your french(lol)
ça serait utile si edward continue a me fouillé les méninges!

._.; Wasn't Rosalie nearly killed by a vampire, not a werewolf? Or did you just change that little bit for the sake of the story? xD

Love the story so far, your writing is VERY similar to Stephenie Meyer's. xD The humor bits crack me up, and I'd have to pretty much cover my mouth so that I don't laugh out gayly and wake up my dad.

Keep it up! ;D

-Kyoshi

Brillant chapter.I'm torn- I don't know if I waNt Vivian with Edward or with Jacob. Keep up the good work!

I LOVE it. It is increasingly awesome and is just making me wish the stupid library will let pay attention to my hold soon. For I have read The Silver Kiss and want to read B&C. When I heard yours had to deal with it I imediatly started reading. Loverly and keep writing.
-Audrey

Loverly it but i don't think Edward would be so willing to catch her. If I were you I would have just let her fall.

Loverly it!

=O
so she's gonna end up with jacob?
*cries*
-Lisa

YOU MUST UPDATE.
NOW.

lol
im really really liking this story..great job!

nice
im really liking this story!!