 Erik'sTrueAngel 2009-07-30 . chapter 1Yay! They're finally married! Very cute!
“Do me a favor,” I said to Jason. “Don’t tell me when your mom gets here.”
He frowned. “Why not?”
“So I don’t break any rules.”
He squinted at me, thinking for a moment, and then asked, “What rules are you talking about?”
“Seeing the bride before the wedding.”
Jason sighed in relief. “Oh, that rule.”
“What rule were you thinking of?”
He shrugged and turned bright red in the face.
I turned red as well.
“Although, that would require seeing the bride before the wedding, I suppose,” he added under his breath.
“Jason!”
I cracked up at this. Clark's so cute when he's blushes. Lovely story! |
 TwilightBEL 2008-11-11 . chapter 1All I can say is WOW!
That was wonderful! I am so glad that you have these 'outtakes' of your BJW story. That was really great to see the wedding from Clark's POV. I also am glad you had that moment in there where Clark was nervous and Jason gave him the same speech that Richard gave him on his wedding day. I think it was very appropriate. Just because it's awkward doesn't mean it's wrong. I'm sure all involved are painfully aware that if Richard were still alive things would most likely be different and there is guilt there. You did a very good job of expressing that.
I also have to say that the ending was very unexpected. I didn't see or notice that the rating had risen to mature. LOL That a very sexy way of ending the chapter. It's nice to see Sups get everything he ever wanted. So much time was lost and, if anyone deserves a happy ending, he does. I'm glad you gave him his happily ever after. :o) It was a long time coming! |
 Kara-El 2008-06-23 . chapter 1Fantastic! I can't believe I missed this one. Better late than never!
Beautiful -- and this from a girl who dislikes wedding fics.
So good I will read it again and again!
Cheers,
K. |
 framework4 2007-09-02 . chapter 1Cute. |
 Fenice 2007-07-02 . chapter 1I don't know why I ignored the Clois serie so far! I am going for more ! |
 heartnut 2007-06-30 . chapter 1Lovely! I'm glad you finally wrote this one for us--it was a grand ficlet, and I wouldn't object to a sequel from Lois' perspective if you wanted to. :) I think you've an excellent side-universe thing going on with these stories, and I can never turn away once I start reading your work! |
 lere 2007-06-28 . chapter 1omg!! I begged to read something from Clark's POV a long time ago, remember? This one shot is really fantastic: Jason and Clark finally being like father and son should be, Jason's second baby, the wedding and, of course, the honeymoon!!
I love your fics, Alphie! Hope to read more soon.
Hug from Brazil. |
 lilvoice1 2007-06-27 . chapter 1alphie can i ask a very important question, WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE LION AND THE LAMB!? cos you havent updated FOR AGES! please update it!
oh, well done with the story too :D |
 DiskoFaery 2007-06-27 . chapter 1 How Adorable.
Love the ending. |