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Reviews for: One Night World
akinos
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
I don't know what to say to you ... I really want to cry ...Alviss's pain ... I can feel it, it makes me very painful ...

Can you write the chapter 2, can't you? Although he can return Mar Heaven, Alviss still may have a better life. Just write it, please. I really do not want to see him like this.

I can say that I love him. I love Alviss, love him so much. I really want to see his smile. Cant you help me?!
Marchenplushie28
2007-06-27 . chapter 1
Alvis always has to suffer. *sighs* I like the story, it made me feel like crying the whole time I read it.
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