AH! Don't stop there, pls!
I wanna read the game TT.TT! Hisoillu forev! ^^
Also, ur an awesome writer - keep trying hard!

Ahahaha. I once used that idea too! The Hershey Kiss thing! I wrote one for this site but I ended up deleting it. Ahahaha. Seeing it again made me laugh.

Killua is so protective of his friend~ How cute~

oh. Nice idea on the island.

You write really well. Hahahaha. I should read your other fics now! Ja ne~

KYA~ This is just too adorable for words! I love the fluff, and your writing style! Omfg, I just love everything about this. xD Ah, yes, I understand that love makes even Hisoka act like a spoiled brat wanting more attention from his older brother (aka Illumi). ;) I actually think that putting a cliffhanger for both the HisoIllu and the LeoPika aspects blended really nice with the story, and somehow, I really love the fact that you didn't make Gon and Killua together. Yet. ;) I understand why you're so proud of this, it really is a nice piece of work! Ahh~ amore! :D :D :D

Time for an oh-so-long review.

We'll start point by point since I assume keen writers like detailed reviews. I'll be quoting in some places too.

1) "Bottom line being: should I write more:D" I'm sorry to tell you, it's a stupid question. Extremely stupid, indeed. I MEAN COME ON! This fic is so damn good! WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!

2) The idea of naming the town as Ailong is very creative. You're giving out great new ideas.

3) There are no grammatical mistakes, which is greatly appreciated.

4) The kisses issue was also creative and totally new.

5) HisoIllu yaoi. A bit of it is great, but too much would be harmful for kids. XP That's when you begin to write yaoi. Some people actually write truly detailed stories which is a bit...ahem...too explicit. -.-;

6) Be fast. We want the next chapter soon, or else I'll get the whole HxH community to chase you around with pitchforks. XD

7) I simply loved everything about this fic. It's totally flawless. Keep on writing, this community needs good-quality fics such as yours.

8) Contact me or reply the review if you wish. My e-mail is available in the usual link for e-mails. Ciao! ^_^

I WOULD EXTREMELY SUPER HYPER want to have an epilogue where Hisoka and Illumi...ah (I think I'm gonna die suffering from madness :">)
Anyway, nice chapter 8-> although His and Ill are a bit OOC (which are already mentioned, of course yes, love makes people OOC 8-> This gives me another inspiration for a fic :">) Anyway great! >__< I can't wait to see the epilogue, thx :">

"“This is what happened.” The raven-haired man stated matter-of-factly as he pulled back the curtains behind him with one swift movement, revealing the heavily pouring rain outside." I don't think I mentioned how much I liked that part. I can just see Illumi pulling back the curtains to show Hisoka the thunderstorm (or rain) he hadn't noticed.

And the ending was uber-cute. *hearts*

-Spirits

I love it!
I'm waiting for the next chap!

YAY! u finally updated! *Jumps around gleefully* ur story is seriously AWESOME!! UPDATE SOON! Oh, and about the 'Sankyuu' part...it isn't only Killua who preferes saying it, ne? U use it too! Anyway u can just ignore dis! UPDATE~!

-Crystal-

(bubbling delightedly) I had an immensely great time reading this first chapter! I hope you update soon! ^^ I'll be looking forward to your promise of more action scenes!

Dis is funny! I liked it! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! Can't wait to see the next chappie!

PS: Isn't HisokaXIllumi or HisokaXGon (and watever)going to be yaoi? (BTW u can just ignore me! LOL! I realy liked ur story!)

-Crystal-

It was great! I really loved the line "...wondering why assassins couldn’t be taught at least the basic of manners." It made me wonder why nobody is ever polite to Leorio.

I thought your characterization was good, especially Illumi. Keep it going!

I hate Gon T_T He steals Hisoka away from Illumi~ :((
This story is good so far ;)) I'd very much love to see HisokaxIllumi >/<

Please update soon ^^