when are u going to update this thing!?

keep writing it is great!

UPDATE TOMMY! OR I WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE (you know that i know where you live) AND... AND... DO SOMETHING BAD (wow... great threat) well my point is that you really need to update (look who's talking though...)

well yeah, that was kinda uneventful... it was funny though,lol.

Write a real chapter soon! ^_^

Hey, I thought I reviewed the first chap! Anyway, I hve been following this story, and I want you to update, and check out the forum for this story.

I love your story, please continue to update! =D

:) Nice so far! Update soon, if you have time! I like it so far!!

Oh, psh! It wasn't boring! Actually, the ceremonies are one of my favorite parts in the books besides the gatherings. Update soon! I must say, Sunpaw has to be my favorite character. I don't know why, I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out! Like I said before: update update update update update update update update update update update update!! ^-^'

Gives you lots of kittens, cute kittens with big blue eyes,
--Dinsoku

Great story! Sunpaw and Moonpaw are so cool! Also, I'm faving you and this story. DON'T PUT ME ON YOUR HATED LIST! I REVIEWED!

I think by now we all know who is being pared with who.
Moonkit gasped. “Whoa…so you are…like…Starclan or something?”

Spottedleaf sighed. “Yes. Starclan or something.”

lol! I love this! It's just to bad that my review doesn't count. you must give me a sneak peek of your next chappie!

lol, good chapie! The only thing is when the 'random cats' in the forest start talking, at first I thought some kit was talking.

Wow. This is like...really good.

The fighting scenes were amazing! Your vocabulary is awesome! It's great how you describe the way Jaykit could judge the ShadowClan cat's next move by studying his muscles. Interesting dream by the way, I was thinking Bluestar would talk to Moonkit rather than Spottedleaf.

Ha! I hope Moonkit gave that ShadowClan cat some nice cuts that'll burn in the morning! Update soon!

Giving you more cookies (or better, Oreos with milk!),
--Dinsoku

Oh... so Shadowclan's planning a surprise attack, huh? Pleaz update!

This story is really good! What will happen to Thunderclan?! What will happen to the kits?! Update!