ohh!! i love love love the last line! this was so cute! you are a wonderful writer!

Pickles. Ice cream.
EW...
I see what James meant XD

aw
i dont think james would be that clueless, but it is so so so so so good anyhow! i love it. i suspected that was what it was with the pickle icecream thing but then you proved it and now i love it so so so much!

*squeal*!

wow i have to admit that was realy good, a little sad at the end but still adorable! cant wait to go read ur other stories!

Aw!The ending made me cry!

u r amazing! u can write a really gud story and make it brilliant. i think that u need to keep up the good work and KEEP WRITING!
saz

Aw... That endings sad! Cute otherwise though!! :D

It's amazing that wizards can be so stopid... It's also rather hilarious.

write more

Omg i love this story!!

I could tell she was pregnant the second I read that James said she HAD TO HAVE the food lol, cravings..

this is going straight on my favourites list!

keep up the good work!
Emmi-Chick

And the happy couple laughed and talked happily on, neither of them aware of the horrors their future would bring, neither one aware that they would never see their baby grow up. But that, is the beauty of life.

Reading the above,makes me almost postive+ that you are a very smart on the "imprtant thinbg in life" and full of wisdom.
So beautiful and well-written and everything a great story should have is in this story..Characters in character...especially Sirius.

damn did you have to write the last part? It's a really lovely story but then you almost make me cry with And the happy couple laughed and talked happily on, neither of them aware of the horrors their future would bring, neither one aware that they would never see their baby grow up. But that, is the beauty of life.

I TOTALLY LOVED IT! into my favs it goes..

Look, here! Here I was thinking, well, since all of my MotherCrumpet inbox updates have been read, why not move onto some L/J?

Look what I've found! Fantastic job. I particularly liked this one...

~100-percent-HP-obsessed