Cool story! Adding this to my favorites!

ooh great i love to see more

This is a truly great story. I've lost track of how many times I've read it. I really wish W.i.t.c.h would of happened like this.

great story

"We fight for right, we go for the light
Together we will the power to unite."

It's supposed to be "WITH OPEN EYES, WE FIND THE LIGHT, together we will HAVE THE POWER TO CONTROL"

But yeah. Coolie ^_^

well all and all a relay grate story pleas a spin off

Nice Job with the final chapter but how did you manage to find the lyrics of the theme song to W.I.T.C.H.?

Once again this chapter plays out well and it builds supense and flavor to the ending.

I actually liked this chapter and it works best when played to very powerful music.

I've heard of a wolf eating a grandma whole but that was comical and funny.

Thanks for showing the true meaning of paradise and I'm sorry for not being here to review when this came hot off the press.

You know I suppose it's a lucky thing no one seems to remember that the end of His for Hunted had Nerissa trying to kill Will but getting her Altimere instead. To bad really that Nerissa only cares for power and doesn't seem to realise how difficult it would be for a woman to rule in say the Middle East. She'd have to become Madame Genocide to Islam to rule Earth. I suppose she could always try and bring everyone back from the dead like she did Cassidey. But that seems to take a lot of time and power which she didn't have.

Personally I still think Caleb's powers were wasted. With not a single battle altered beyond recognizable form from his mere presence his powers didn't do any good. Needless to say, you could have written this story without giving Caleb any powers at all. I'm just saying you wasted Caleb's power. You shouldn't have even bothered giving him such power sese he never used it decesively.

Hmm, interesting. So you expect us to believe that Caleb with all that power you gave him could not effect a single battle. Every single battle ended the same way. Well at least the fighting sequences are over now and the most horrible parts are behind us. Pity that Phobos was all but in the episode.

It seemed to be the end of something quite extraoridnary and I will miss reading your story. It has been a great one with all the things I expected, so goodbye and good luck for your projects in the future.

Finally got around to reading this chapter. Well anyways I'd have to say that I think the guardians were a little to quick to accept Caleb back but it's no more unbelievable then Phobos entrusting Cedric with a portion of the seals power after everything that has happened between them. I have to say that after that incident I've begun to think that Phobos is Bi-Polar. It would definitely explain his psychotic rages.

To bad the people of Meridian aren't the type to try and treat such conditions. So far all the people on Meridian would rather hide their problems and pretend they have a paradise to dealing with the skeletons in their closets.

Cedri and Miranda. The guardians are right those two make for a major ew but I'd really prefer to think of them in terms like the X-Men's major enemies Magneto and Mystique. Completely dedicated to the superiority of their own race. That is shapeshifters superiority.