NICE. Update! This is a promising story!

So how many kids does Kel have with Dom? I counted at least four, but I am thinking six... Would you let me know? Thanks!

xXthenextbookwormXx

nicely written!
Gosh, i cant imagine life for me that far into the future!

Do you hate Esmond or something?

I love this! You should write a fic about the kids. I think it would be hilarious.

Ah ha ha ha, Grandfather! Oh, man, even at their old ages Neal and Kel don't fail to amuse me.

Very nice story. I enjoyed it immensely.

~Jaden Scorpio~

No, it's pretty clear, and really great! I like all the ideas of Kel's children, especially berdine and the 'reincarnation' of neal. Love the story

HI I LIKE UR WRITING BUT AREN'T U GONNA WRITE SOME MORE? U SHOULD ITS GOOD

I liked it! It was cute. But I'm a little confused... who EXACTLY was together? I thought it was Kel and Dom, then Kel and Neal, and then I was just like - o.O
Anyway, so, yeah, cool one-shot, but a little confusing.

Hahahaha I liked it!! (Dommy... ha ha ha =)

Nice job.

"Grandfather." and, "What interesting news could my eldest son possibly ha—no. No, I refuse to believe what you’re insinuating." Oh my gosh, I laughed so hard there. I loved it! I couldn't relate at all, I'm much too young, but, hey, you described it very well. I understood it, and seeing as I'm a teen, that is no small feat. I am going to show this to my mother. She will like it! Oh my gosh, you are so funny! solemn where it needs to be, but hilarious where you want it! I love love love it. you are going on my fave authors list now. bye bye!

loved the ending!

I love the last part!

Aw, this was great. Funny ending. I can't believe Shinko and Roald had a kid named Roger...I wonder how that happened.

ahh, Neal. even at fifty one he still can't control himself. this is good, but sometimes the kids get kinda confusing...especially little Neal. is he Kel's son? that confused me a bit. anyway, good job.