Yes this is was hat was ideally supposed to happen

I know this is a pretty old story, but I read it and thought it was amazing!

It's probably the most realistic Trory out there. Most of them make Tristan and Rory both so "mushy" and even though that's cute, that's probably not exactly how it would happen.

Great job!

I liked that story!

That was great; very in-character for both of them. Nice work.

Awe that was awesome. Keep up the great work.

Dani

Just three words..:
Naw..! :) & Great fic!

(here is the review you were craving...:P)

I'm like reading all of your Trory fics and they just continue to amaze me. They are all awesome and different, but all equally great! I liked the way she kissed him and their hole banter, funny.

“So… was your like for me a crush type thing? Was there bad poetry involved?”

“Drunken ramblings, actually.”
Great =p

So, I have to say that I am quite mad. I have no clue if you read my story, I Got You, but yours is mighty similar. Better written, yes, but mighty similar all the same. For one, yours starts off at the exact- and i mean EXACT- moment mine does in the show. For another, yours branches off into your own story at once again the EXACT moment mine does. And these are only two of the main similarities.
So if you did in fact read my story and is what gave you the idea to write yours, I ask of you one simple thing: credit me as doing so. If this is merely a very strange coincidence, I apologize for my bitchiness.
But on another note, I cannot deny that I enjoyed your story even though I was quite mad that you had possibly taken the idea from me. It was well written and realistic, which are the main things I personally look for in stories- that authors draw readers into their story.
Please message me back.

Awesome, I really liked it.
Especially how you pictured Tristan and Rory. Just perfect and def. not out of character.

She didn’t turn him into a whipped sentimentalist and he didn’t corrupt her purity. But somehow, Bible Boy and his Mary managed to make it work.

Best line ever, exactly my thoughts. There are just too many Stories where Tristan is too nice. You really did a great job finding a compromise between the nice Tristan and the bad boy Tristan.

This is TOTALLY the way Run Away, Little Boy should have gone. I really liked this and you wrote it very well.

That was cute.

;claps gleefully;

YAYAYAYA

I absolutely hate DEANO. His name sounds like a drainage cleaner or something.

;shivers;

this captures the retardedness of their relationship so well and you made them kiss!

:D

ha! Loved it! Really something different.

That was good. I totally love it!

i loved it! would you maybe think about making this more than a one shot?? seriously it was great!