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| Dyanasty Artemis 2008-07-14 ch 2,  | abuseI really like this story Sonsasu! Are you going to update it anytime soon? |
| Kuro Jigoku Tatsumaki 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abuseNice story! More Please! |
| Gin Kitsune Kijo Ansatsusha 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! I love it! Thanks for helping! I finally figured this thing out and I feel stupid for not noticing it sooner. |
| midnightsprite 2008-01-16 ch 2, | abuseAAW! You are my fave writer! |
| SilverFang4190 2007-12-22 ch 2, | abuseI like this very much! It's so interesting with the addition of a new planet, dragons/shifters, plus predators you have a brilliant plot. Please update soon! |
| Stormrunner56 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseI've said it before as an anonymous reviewer to other authors stories. This one is excellent, truly it is. However, much like the others I reviewed, I have a request... FINISH IT! :) Thanks! |
| vegetasfan14720 2007-08-22 ch 2, | abuseUpdate! Update!! UPDATE! Plz. *~Vegetasfan~* |
| The Oracle Dragon 2007-08-02 ch 2, | abuseThis review is for both chaps because thr review button for the frist chap didn't work. LOVE THE STORY! I LOVE PREDATORS AND DRAGONS! |
| The Ginger Ninja 2007-07-31 ch 2, | abuseOh, so whats up with Lone-Spear's past then hm? (looks interested) (poke) I'm looking forward to seeing these two characters develop - they have a lot of potential (^^) Nice chappy! |
| Xenomorph977 2007-07-30 ch 2, | abusevery nice chapter |
| Ange De Mort La Pomme De Sa... 2007-07-26 ch 2, | abuseI enjoy your writing, your characters grow with every chapter. Keep up the good work. |
| Opera-Gypsy 2007-07-26 ch 2, | abuseThat was cute! Ciao |
| ReilyDraven 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuselike, i think not ,love i more the word, i love it! |
| chancelor22 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseHello, me again. I see that you have expanded the story line(s). Nice. I am interested to see how this one goes. I do have a bit of a side note though. You had called the yaut'ja the same at the hish. Most avid followers do not consider them to be the same. Maybe different breeds of the same species, but NOT the same. The only reason I mention this is because I would hate for something like that to offend some one. I personally don't care, but others might. However, it is your fic and you can do whatever it is that you want. And I will read whatever it is that you post. Until next time... |
| Xenomorph977 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseReally Good story. |