kya~! hilarious!

i almost died because of laughing! *laughs even more*

cool!

OMG! *falls over* that was hilarious!! you matched each character perfectly. It was AWESOME!! the humorous drama! nice. I loved!

NICE!! ^^

Lol, I love the scene where the audience shouts out "YAOI!" And I never noticed before, but you're right- the prince could have just looked for girls that had blond/orange hair only instead of trying out the slipper on everyone! :D

that was freaking awesome :3 i loved it..the animals were so mean to dei O_O wo "** OFF!" he barked as he tried to bite off Ordifer's tail. Ordifer screeched as he jumped up the window.

"Have a nice fall to hell" Hiduno snared as Ordifer slipped down to what seems to be a five story fall.
that part made my day :D

haha funny story!

Oh, how I loved Tobi with his tissues (though I'm usually not fond of him in anyway special. he's a nice fella) :D Lovely, alltogether. Gosh, I love a happy ending... Cheered up my day! Thanks for that!

Oh man, this was one hella funny fiction.:B The names by theyselfs were funny, but the things, that happened.. Hehe, my stomach hurts from the laughing XD
Best oneshot I have ever read. You rock! ^^

this was hilarious keep up the good work

XD
I love it.
It was hilarious.