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| GreyTwine 2008-01-01 ch 1,  | abuseYour descriptions are quite well done. You used "who knows..." twice and quite near to each other, and I find that that type of colloquialism only works once. But if that's what I'm complaining about, you did really well. :) |
| EnjoyingObsession 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abusethis was very nicely written. You capture melancholy well. |
| O what magic 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseYour SA stories are so short...but incredibly moving. Great talent. Hope you write more |
| songawakening 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI love Ilse stories :) She's such a fun mind to fabricate |
| Miss Wallflower 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseOh God, and I thought Colors of Summer had gotten to me. This was... so moving. You have a serious talent. |
| stars_inthe_sky (LJ) 2007-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery lovely. |
| grasping at pearls 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really beautiful! Always glad to see more SA authors on the site. :D |
| The Pixess 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseHonestly, it's a shame no one else reviewed its companion fic but me so far, because you are a great writer. Poor Ilse; I wanted to kick Martha at her part, especially since "The Dark I Know Well" is one of my favorite songs from Spring Awakening, if not my actual favorite. I really found myself in Ilse's character, related to her. I like that she still had enough fun despite her hardships to get into the roles she played before Moritz. Also the thing with the sounds and the realer sounds. I so have to see this show (as it stands, I'm just a soundtrack junkie) I love this fic. |