a man with a lust for power green hair tall and thin a crown of darkness demons relised through a sealed heart he becomes what he sees a single visable eye the purest gold he live in an rage because his one and only was killed by his brother

a phycopath stout a large blood splattered hammer rests on his sholder red eyes a crackle that peirces the soul a bandana draped over a dark secret he can see your flaws he lives on fear

heh heh... heh use them

I like this story, it has lots of potential.
One thing that bugs me though.
write longer chapters, much longer ones, just a bit longer then the one i'm reveiwing on. Then it would be a very good story.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I LOVE THIS STORY! (is whacked over the head with a baseball bat)...Ouch. Anyway, everything is great about this story! Please, hurry and update!

Squee! Ciao!

This story ain't half bad! I cannot wait for the other chapters!

DUN DUN DUN!

Gotta love plot twists. X3

KEEP WRITING OR I SIC CHUCK QUIZMO ON YOU. XD

Ciao!

~Kit Quizmo

Squee, Mr.L~! -fangirly squeal- XD

Ki:...You do that all of the time. Kinda old. -.-;

Kit-Chan: Shut up. ;-;

You keep writin', 'K? Ciao!

~Kit-Chan Teh Spiffinator. Lolz.

I'm loving this story so far! ^-^

Only three people have reveiwed. Ouch. (XD) Don'y worry, It's good! ^-^;

Not terrible.

Kind of nice.

Much good writeing

Could be good.

Quite neat. Not bad.

Interesting

Neat

Cute. Okay I guess.