Oooo. Good.

Lovely story! Very well done! :) If you would like to cross-post it at any time, I would love to include it in my "Library" (www.sheshat.com). Keep up the good work!

Great writing! Giving us a different perspective of Ian Nottingham. He's not a ghoul, just lonely. Very devoted to Sara. Liked the touch of romance, too.

You can feel the turmoil brewing inside of Ian. Great story.

That was a nice insight to ian, but *spoiler alert about maelstrom* ...in maelstrom, the wb didnt cut ian, he did it to himslef on purpose

Nice... I think that if he was given a chance, Ian might be more of a hero... but while he is under Irons' thumb... it will not happen but in small doses as you have said... Bravo.

How fabulous...it really reveals many of my own theories about who Ian tolerates Irons..great story

Bravo! Great job of writing from Ian's POV, very angsty and soulful.

I'm impressed. I thought it was very good. I like your insight into Ian. Keep it up!

Very well done.

i LIKED IT VERY MUCH, YOU SEE FEW STORIES WHERE THEY GIVE INSIGHT ON HOW IAN THINKS

oh wow...that is so wonderfully sweet and sad at the same time...

Hm. Very nice! Not cheesy. ::thumbs up::

Wow. . I really I wish I could write in your style, effectively make people see an insight I belive is in a character. That was excellent. Keep up the good work, and write lots more in the future!

I thought it was good. I especially liked the part where Ian wanted to comfort Sara as she held onto Conchobar, but he knew she wouldn't welcome his "presense." Good job with keeping in character.