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| Amy 2008-06-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseAh, I hate writer's block. I know the feeling- when you want to update something for your readers but nothing will come to you. I hope your muse returns soon because I'm really enjoying this! |
| junebride 2008-06-17 ch 7, | abusewell I'm glad to see an update at any rate! be interesting to see whats up with abby |
| Amy 2008-06-15 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is a fantastic story! Very dramatic and you write the characters so well. I do hope you're planing to continue it :). |
| blackflame28 2008-05-31 ch 6, | abuse... that's not it, is it? you are going to do more, aren't you? I love this story. I love the Dawn (sorry, "read")/ Abby friendship. I love how Dawn has changed. I even love how you broke up Dawn and Mary Anne... it's so bitter sweet. I hope you update soon. |
| lyin' 2008-05-24 ch 2, | abusethe Read bit surprised me a little... sounds to me like mary anne hooked up w/ someone dawn was seeing or something, though i could be way off- nice to see kristy though |
| lyin' 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abusefelt nostalgic and was checking out BSC stories, and this is a really compelling beginning- looking forward to reading the rest! |
| Scorpiana Silvester 2008-04-27 ch 6, | abuseAww...sad!! |
| Drucilla Black 2008-04-17 ch 6, | abuseGreat story, please update again soon! |
| junebride 2008-04-16 ch 6, | abuseAw how sad :-( Good chapter though! |
| junebride 2008-04-16 ch 5, | abusethis fic is AWESOME! can't wait to see some more |
| Bec 2008-04-12 ch 5, anon. | abuseAmazing. Plot twists coming out of nowhere, perfect characterisation, gripping dialogue and vivid descriptions...I just read the whole thing straight through and I am DYING for the next part. I did have a bit of an issue technically with your tenses - it switched from past to present tense a few times, which was annoying. Not a big deal but something to note. Regardless, infinity stars for you. |
| Drucilla Black 2008-04-12 ch 5, | abuseGreat story, please update again soon! |
| laura-csm 2008-04-11 ch 5, | abuseThis is a wonderful story. I love how Dawn and Abby have changed. |
| Chicleeblair 2007-11-30 ch 4, | abuseaw man! please pick this back up! |
| Delph123 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is brilliant so far PLEASE update soon x |