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Amy
2008-06-21
ch 7, anon.
abuseAh, I hate writer's block. I know the feeling- when you want to update something for your readers but nothing will come to you. I hope your muse returns soon because I'm really enjoying this!
junebride
2008-06-17
ch 7,
abusewell I'm glad to see an update at any rate!
be interesting to see whats up with abby
Amy
2008-06-15
ch 6, anon.
abuseThis is a fantastic story! Very dramatic and you write the characters so well. I do hope you're planing to continue it :).
blackflame28
2008-05-31
ch 6,
abuse... that's not it, is it? you are going to do more, aren't you?

I love this story. I love the Dawn (sorry, "read")/ Abby friendship. I love how Dawn has changed. I even love how you broke up Dawn and Mary Anne...

it's so bitter sweet.

I hope you update soon.
lyin'
2008-05-24
ch 2,
abusethe Read bit surprised me a little... sounds to me like mary anne hooked up w/ someone dawn was seeing or something, though i could be way off- nice to see kristy though
lyin'
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abusefelt nostalgic and was checking out BSC stories, and this is a really compelling beginning- looking forward to reading the rest!
Scorpiana Silvester
2008-04-27
ch 6,
abuseAww...sad!!
Drucilla Black
2008-04-17
ch 6,
abuseGreat story, please update again soon!
junebride
2008-04-16
ch 6,
abuseAw how sad :-(
Good chapter though!
junebride
2008-04-16
ch 5,
abusethis fic is AWESOME!
can't wait to see some more
Bec
2008-04-12
ch 5, anon.
abuseAmazing.

Plot twists coming out of nowhere, perfect characterisation, gripping dialogue and vivid descriptions...I just read the whole thing straight through and I am DYING for the next part.

I did have a bit of an issue technically with your tenses - it switched from past to present tense a few times, which was annoying. Not a big deal but something to note.

Regardless, infinity stars for you.
Drucilla Black
2008-04-12
ch 5,
abuseGreat story, please update again soon!
laura-csm
2008-04-11
ch 5,
abuseThis is a wonderful story. I love how Dawn and Abby have changed.
Chicleeblair
2007-11-30
ch 4,
abuseaw man! please pick this back up!
Delph123
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is brilliant so far PLEASE update soon x
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