|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| SWEET-STUFF063 2008-04-16 ch 3, | abusenice job |
| Angie 2008-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis sounds like a very good story. What does OOC mean? I've heard it a lot! I probably should now this since i really like the twilight series but i don't. What does it mean? |
| PuttingMySoulOnPaper 2007-09-29 ch 3, | abuseI like it but I can't think of what should happen next. Hm...well, uh...her plain could crash edward saves them...no no, um...ugh!! I have imaginer's block!! lol. sorry...i'll try to think of something and quietly suggest it so i don't annoy which i've already done. lol. ttyl |
| ibelieveinsnorkacks 2007-08-16 ch 3, | abuse*tear* Sad, but good. I'm glad it had a bitter-sweet ending instead of just a sad one |
| Spacy-Book-Nerd 2007-08-01 ch 3, | abuseyour right pancakes are yummy but waffles are like OH MY GOD YUMMY ha ha |
| eReid 2007-07-25 ch 3, | abuseThat was very sad. But it was also very good. And, i can concur with your statement, waffles are awesome. Course, now i want some (stupid power of suggestion) and we unfortunatly have none. Ah, well. Anyways, it was very good. Excellent. |
| DatingACullen 2007-06-29 ch 3, | abuse^-^ I love the story so far! Hurry up and update so I can fulfill my need to read the rest! |
| Lets play x D e a d 2007-06-29 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter, I'm glad she's less angry :) Welp, Update soon. |
| Mollytigerc 2007-06-29 ch 3, | abuseLOL. I love your comment. Yes I LOVE edward more than I like pancakes. ^-^ That was an adorable sad chapter. Update Soon. |
| Enpowerswan 2007-06-29 ch 3, | abuseNice! I really like it! The sappyness is kinda hard to avoid though, so don't freak about it. |
| Enpowerswan 2007-06-29 ch 2, | abuseWha! I feel bad for Edward. he is really getting scorned by Bella. |
| moonstar.twinkle 2007-06-29 ch 3, | abusewhat r u talking about! of course it roxS! i like it, thought ist's a little ironic. but that doesn't matter. cuz its your brain, and wrote a pretty good story. liked it! |
| Churchill Vampiress 2007-06-29 ch 3, | abuseI like it! Please update soon. |
| Mollytigerc 2007-06-29 ch 2, | abuseI loved the first chapter It was so cute and adorable. Pancakes. ^-^ I LOVED that part. I like this chapter too. It was good. I was sad. Update Soon. ^-^ |
| Lets play x D e a d 2007-06-28 ch 2, | abuseIt's a very well written fic, but.. I think Bella is acting a wee bit to angry[just my opinion], yes I no serious stuff, but still. All in all its really good. Please, Update soon. |