Props to you! I'm not normally a 20-movie-fan (i prefer the old one) or a Judas/Mary shipper, but you totally made this work. The "lie to me" rings particularly true.

Off to see if you've written anything else...

Oh. This was a fantastic story. One of the best I've ever read. Definitely the most sentimental. The 20 version was the first version of the musical that I can remember seeing. I love Judas! He's my favorite character. He's so tormented. I find him much more interesting than Jesus. It's funny, it almost seems like the musical is more about him than about Jesus. Thank you so much for writing this story! I went to this category specifically looking for a Mary/Judas story, and this one can quench my thirst forever. Brilliant.

Wow, very nice. Very poetic. Two souls drawn together in tragedy...Great.