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| BlackWolfHowling 2008-07-08 ch 22, | abuseWhich, I will point out, is the only way you can get away with ending a story at a cliffy. And this thing's gotten popular, I noticed. Well, maybe not now that I think of it... |
| Cinnamonpool 2008-07-08 ch 21, | abuseYay! You're writing a sequel! Can I be in the next chapter? ~Sierra's Fayte |
| BlackWolfHowling 2008-07-07 ch 21, | abuseThat reminded me of "Mewtwo Strikes Back" in the end. |
| Cinnamonpool 2008-06-30 ch 19, | abuseOkay, I already read to the next chapter but it won't let me review twice so here I am. Hurry up and update! I need to know what happens next! -hugs- ur story is just so awesome! |
| Cinnamonpool 2008-06-29 ch 20, | abuseYay! You added her! That make me happy! And, Serenity is sorta snappyish. She's got a really short fuse, but hard to threaten or annoy. |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-06-25 ch 18, | abuseThere, I've read all three chapters I missed. I'm poop out! This one, just like others were good too...I'm sorry for not reviewing, man. Like I told you before, blame that on my E-mail! Later & Out! |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-06-25 ch 19, | abuseHmm...You're skipping straight to the 7th badge, eh? Well, I can't say why, though! You story isn't boring to me...Pretty COOL! Like this chapter was. |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-06-25 ch 20, | abuseLISTEN! I'M SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING IN A LONG TIME! Something was wrong with E-Mail account and I wasn't getting your update alerts. I've still got to read the other chapters too! Anyways, this one was good...Hehehe...I'll probably still that song of yours, I kidd! LATER! |
| BlackWolfHowling 2008-06-23 ch 20, | abuseI'm going to take a stab in the dark and say that this Serenity is either a gym leader or a relative of a gym leader. I have no ideas, unfortunately. Keep up the good work. |
| Cinnamonpool 2008-06-21 ch 6, | abuseP.S.- Just because Zephyr and Caspian are young, in no way means they are weak, although Zephyr's powers are still developing. And can I change the species for Caspian? She's a Legendary firefox/dragon hybrid Elemental. Long thingy, I know, but, me no cares. |
| Cinnamonpool 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseOkay, here we go: Name: Serenity Personality: Quiet, reserved, secretive, sarcastic and a pessimist. Gender: Girl Age: 12 Hair: Silver with hints of black Eyes: Cold, icy blue Clothes: I don't care Breeder/Pokemon Trainer Pokemon: Zephyr (Female), Caspian (female) Other: Your choice. Pokemon: Name: Zephyr Age: 3 months (baby pokemon) Fur color(s): Black with silver dusting around muzzle Eye color: Deep gold with icy blue shards. Type: Water/psychic/dark/fire Species: Wolf/Dragon Small light Other: Your choice Name: Caspian Age: 1 year (first stage) Fur color: golden-red Eye color: Dark silver Type: Fire/Thunder/Dark Species: cat/firefox/dragon hybrid Medium, coyote sized Medium, average 7 year-old Other: Your choice |
| dpbclover 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThe story is really good, but did you get Train and Saya from Black Cat? |
| BlackWolfHowling 2008-06-04 ch 18, | abuseNo ideas, unfortunately. Update soon. |
| Sakura999 2008-05-18 ch 17, | abuseI liked the plot and I liked how you portrayed Fade. Would like to read more - update soon ! Good fic. If you like you can post on w w w . justexpressing . com - the readers would like it and you could get some more reviews. I did that. You can join and post under Games/Pokemon. |
| BlackWolfHowling 2008-05-17 ch 17, | abuseGood chapter. Update soon, please. |