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BlackWolfHowling
2008-07-08
ch 22,
abuseWhich, I will point out, is the only way you can get away with ending a story at a cliffy. And this thing's gotten popular, I noticed. Well, maybe not now that I think of it...
Cinnamonpool
2008-07-08
ch 21,
abuseYay! You're writing a sequel! Can I be in the next chapter?
~Sierra's Fayte
BlackWolfHowling
2008-07-07
ch 21,
abuseThat reminded me of "Mewtwo Strikes Back" in the end.
Cinnamonpool
2008-06-30
ch 19,
abuseOkay, I already read to the next chapter but it won't let me review twice so here I am. Hurry up and update! I need to know what happens next! -hugs- ur story is just so awesome!
Cinnamonpool
2008-06-29
ch 20,
abuseYay! You added her! That make me happy! And, Serenity is sorta snappyish. She's got a really short fuse, but hard to threaten or annoy.
Twanny Bizzle
2008-06-25
ch 18,
abuseThere, I've read all three chapters I missed. I'm poop out! This one, just like others were good too...I'm sorry for not reviewing, man. Like I told you before, blame that on my E-mail!

Later & Out!
Twanny Bizzle
2008-06-25
ch 19,
abuseHmm...You're skipping straight to the 7th badge, eh? Well, I can't say why, though! You story isn't boring to me...Pretty COOL! Like this chapter was.
Twanny Bizzle
2008-06-25
ch 20,
abuseLISTEN! I'M SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING IN A LONG TIME! Something was wrong with E-Mail account and I wasn't getting your update alerts. I've still got to read the other chapters too!

Anyways, this one was good...Hehehe...I'll probably still that song of yours, I kidd!

LATER!
BlackWolfHowling
2008-06-23
ch 20,
abuseI'm going to take a stab in the dark and say that this Serenity is either a gym leader or a relative of a gym leader. I have no ideas, unfortunately. Keep up the good work.
Cinnamonpool
2008-06-21
ch 6,
abuseP.S.- Just because Zephyr and Caspian are young, in no way means they are weak, although Zephyr's powers are still developing. And can I change the species for Caspian?
She's a Legendary firefox/dragon hybrid Elemental. Long thingy, I know, but, me no cares.
Cinnamonpool
2008-06-20
ch 3,
abuseOkay, here we go:

Name: Serenity
Personality: Quiet, reserved, secretive, sarcastic and a pessimist.
Gender: Girl
Age: 12
Hair: Silver with hints of black
Eyes: Cold, icy blue
Clothes: I don't care
Breeder/Pokemon Trainer
Pokemon: Zephyr (Female), Caspian (female)
Other: Your choice.

Pokemon:
Name: Zephyr
Age: 3 months (baby pokemon)
Fur color(s): Black with silver dusting around muzzle
Eye color: Deep gold with icy blue shards.
Type: Water/psychic/dark/fire
Species: Wolf/Dragon
Small
light
Other: Your choice

Name: Caspian
Age: 1 year (first stage)
Fur color: golden-red
Eye color: Dark silver
Type: Fire/Thunder/Dark
Species: cat/firefox/dragon hybrid
Medium, coyote sized
Medium, average 7 year-old
Other: Your choice
dpbclover
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseThe story is really good, but did you get Train and Saya from Black Cat?
BlackWolfHowling
2008-06-04
ch 18,
abuseNo ideas, unfortunately. Update soon.
Sakura999
2008-05-18
ch 17,
abuseI liked the plot and I liked how you portrayed Fade. Would like to read more - update soon ! Good fic.

If you like you can post on w w w . justexpressing . com - the readers would like it and you could get some more reviews. I did that. You can join and post under Games/Pokemon.
BlackWolfHowling
2008-05-17
ch 17,
abuseGood chapter. Update soon, please.
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