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Etinarg12
2007-11-23
ch 21,
abuseAwesome snapshots into Hitsugaya's and Matsumoto's lives. I really love the chemistry those two seem to share and would love for them to be together, although that will probably never happen outside of fanfic's. Anyway, can't wait to read more!
Toushiroseyes
2007-10-21
ch 21,
abuseAw, great story. A more softer side of the pairing.^^

Orihime is love.^^
heidi-mayer87
2007-10-14
ch 21,
abuseOh god, so much cuteness! Typical of Shiro-chan to be completely surrounded by sneaky cat-women without him even realising it!
"Not to mention the little matter of sprouting ice wings and an ice tail when he was really **." That phrase made me snicker.
antrax1
2007-10-13
ch 21, anon.
abusehi there!

it seems for some daft reason my review for chapter 18 didnt get through, so i guess this will be a double review. do you ever get irked at having to write the same thing twice?

the reason i hadnt reviewed for quite a while is that my computer decided to completely conk out on me. it took ages to get a new replacement, and in between then the sinister clutches of school were reaching for me. sigh. i hadnt had a break for ages. when i finally got back on the ffnet and saw the 3 updated chapters!! i wrote 3 reviews but only two got through. but anyway,

i loved chapter 18!! loved it! i thought you got the awkward hitsugaya's character down to a nail. and i just loved how he didnt want to get her dress dirty, and how he knew matsaumoto wouldnt spy on him. i particurly like the hitsu/matsu stories where they have that kind of trust. i even liked the flash where matsumotos at her wedding (a sequel perhaps?) poor hitsugaya.

as for chapter 21, thats gotta rate with my favorites! apart from anything else its amusing thinking of hitsu sneezing. i also liked the idea of cat like grace for matsumoto. its not something you would immedietly connect. i really wish they would show the avater of her zenpaktau. i personally find it hilarious at the idea of hitsugaya having a cold!

good one! hope you update soon!
i'll be back!
reflecting
2007-10-13
ch 21,
abuseso cute, so adorable, so...so SQUEE! 8D lol good writing, as usual. I hope you update soon! :3 this made my day, now I'm off to celebrate my bday with muffins and fluffy feelings caused by HitsuMatsu-ness. thanks! -bows-
kinichi
2007-10-12
ch 21,
abuseyay hitsumatsu!
Odat
2007-10-12
ch 21,
abuseAww! Thank you! I love it! I got so excited when I saw the title! = D Thank you so much!
spedclass
2007-10-12
ch 21,
abuseAwesome chapter keep up the goos work and update soon!
Oliviax3
2007-10-12
ch 21,
abuse"ah-choo!"

Thanks for the wonderful update! it was satisfied my craving for something to read. Plus, this chapter was just too creative! I loved it!
heidi-mayer87
2007-10-08
ch 20,
abuseThat was definitely one of, if not the very best, fanfics I've read on Histsugaya/Matsumoto. Some of the pieces were just- priceless, for the lack of the better word. I've not even read all of those, only the first five or so, and the twelth, No Introductions, 'cause I really couldn't help myself when I read the first lines... I'm saving it up to read later, to savour and re-read, without any hurry, and I'll be holding my breath for any, even smallest updates, because the way you write them just warms my heart. Thank you so much for your work. ^__^
antrax1
2007-10-05
ch 20, anon.
abuseAnd my final review for now. i reckened id do seperate ones since ive missed your last few updates.

so... 34. i can so see that happening to some poor naive sod. those breasts of hers really are a lethal weapon. and poor hitsugaya overheating in a car, loved that part. i wonder how hed do in hueco mundo's desert?

35, was hilarious with the faces, i was tempted to pull a few faces in the mirror afterwards...but enough of my sadness...

36 is by far my leading player out of this trio. bad matsumoto staring at his butt.god its so funny!! moral support,yeah right! i just so love hiysugaya suffering under her neverending antics. where on earth do you get your ideas? they rock!

and i might have a challange for you if youre intrested. something thats been nagging me for a while, whats with matsus scarf? who gave it to her? what does it mean? i had this funny idea that it was some long lost priceless ancient treasure that hitsu found gave it to her without her having a clue of its worth until she lost it, but as usual when i tried to write it down it sucked. perhaps you could have a crack at a scarf story of some sort?

oh yeah, possibly you could have a short drabble on matsumoto playing with that little tuft of hair jutting out, i could easily picture her doing something like that to annoy him!

well i'll wrap up for now. brilliant work as usual! i really hope you do continue writing ten as its one of the best hitsu/matsu stories out there.

i'll be back!
antrax1
2007-10-05
ch 19, anon.
abuseme again.

i really dont know who to feel more sorry for after that. i think i'll go with matsumoto but its a close thing. i thought the tension throughout was great. its not my favorite but thats only because im such a sucker for happy endings.its fantastic! it seems like someone has been reading romeo and juliet, i love the characters in the play its just shame they get killed off in the end.

still, really good.
Viashino wizard
2007-10-04
ch 20,
abuseI knew, the moment he turned over, what she was gonna say.

It was still funny as hell.
Zessei
2007-10-03
ch 20,
abuseI love HitsuMatsu stories! Keep it up!
Conterra-san
2007-09-30
ch 20,
abusehahahaha omg that is just the way i could see matsumoto acting down there in the end.

and i liked the bit when shiro-chan was like damn this pants are tight, i just thought really amusing.

~C
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