Please update soon!

I really was expecting the talk between Darien and Serena but this is just as good too. Hope you update soon! :D

love it! plaese plase update asap! i just love this story!

INteresting thought at the end there Darien. But if you are really serious about Serena being mature and facing off without the Outers and the Generals behind her, then you should be willing to be there without the Inners to back you up. He knows as it stands now the odds are stacked against them. He'd rather have things the way they used to be. Where they could count on superior numbers to keep Serena 'in her place'. The question is, are The Outers and the Generals going to let Darien and the Inners pull the 'gang-up' scenario? And even if they did manage to get Serena alone, not all the Inners are necessarilly backing Darien in this endeavor.

O, what's gonna happen next! I CAN'T WAIT!

PLZ UDPATE SOON!

man, that was long awaited for, all Darrien did in a fight was show up, throw a rose to distract the enemy, talk to the scouts and then jump away. lol

about time he got floored with one hit, keep it up

please tell me amara kicks some ass! I really want the outers and the generals to beat the inners (as much as i hate these guys fighting each other) but hey, i gotta route for the ones i love! Go Outers! Go Generals! Go Serena!

This outta be good.

Why did you change the spelling of Rei's name?

Can't wait for the outer to show up.

lol Darien does not deserve her right now.

Great work on this story.

Serves them right.

Will the Senshi find out about the Shitennou?

"My family here isn’t really my family anyway, they won’t miss me. I placed them under my spell years ago and gave them all the significant memories a person should have. Pregnancy, birth, childhood…. they simply just won’t recall my existence." Interesting