love it sequl forgive my spelling lol

so good - didn't want it to end!

i loved this story SO much! I wish it didn't end:(!

aww, poor Will. great story though:)

great start:)

dustbins.
(that was the word you were looking for, wasn't it?)
:D

Great story !
Loved it !

please please please write a sequel.

Whoop! Another modern-day W/E fic! And there's a pregnancy to deal with! Plenty of potential for giggles.lol. But, as it's nearly midnight it'll have to wait. I'm sure it'll be worth it. :)

Great story! The epilogue was wonderful. I love Kate's character.

*chokes* cough cough choke "Yup, it killed me!!" says my ghost. lol anyhoo... is there a sequel in the works? pretty please?

HAHAHAHAHA! That must be awkward. LOL

I'm here to make good on my promise.

And since I've already explained my dilemma with reviewing stories, I hope you will understand that I have chosen to review the story as a whole rather than go through chapter to chapter. I'm going to try and be quick about this review, but seeing as I've already spent a couple minutes just writing nothing, the chances of that are looking sort of slim.

Anyway...

Here is what I liked the best about your story.

1. The dialogue. It was natural and clever and fun to read. I envy that talent of yours.

2. You had a plot. That sounds sort of odd, seeing as every story has a plot, but yours in particular seemed to have been planned out and was more than "Elizabeth is pregnant and they are trying to figure out how to become parents" Although I guess that was the basic plot, it was just the bones of it. Sometimes stories have plots that are resolved in one chapter, so that it's not really much of a story. But yours was nothing like that. And that made it very enjoyable. There, that's what I'm trying to say.

3. It was realistic. Elizabeth and Will had a fight. I absolutely loved the fight. Reading stories where they continually got along are so wearying. It's not very realistic, and I personally don't find them nearly as interesting. Besides, Elizabeth is such a spitfire, that she HAS to fight with Will sometimes.

4. Your characterization. I loved how you had consistent traits in all of your characters. Especially Will, seeing as most of the story was from his point of view. I loved your character of Will, and I think you did great with that.

5. Good grammar. Although I'm hardly an expert, your grammar was good and made the story readable. I used to be very tolerant of people who couldn't spell and didn't realize the importance of a comma, but I can't even get through one chapter like that anymore. So although it seems like a minor thing, it actually can be quite important. Besides the mechanics, I really enjoyed your writing style.

I think that's all I really have to say. I'm shocked, it only took me about fifteen minutes to write this. It's way more straightforward than my usual meandering reviews, but I'm quite proud of myself.

I'm not exactly one who can comment on all of the areas in which I just complimented you, seeing as they are areas I am lacking in my own writing. Maybe that makes it less of a compliment, but either way they were what I noticed when reading your story and my opinions on your story. You did a great job, and I sort of don't want to believe that was your first story!

And I must add, yours is one of the few stories, the only PotC one, that I have ever read twice. Maybe that means something, but I suppose coming from me, not as much as it could :D

I just want to say that this story was magnificent and that I just read the entire thing last night! The modern day put me off at first but after I read the first few chapters, I was hooked! I haven't read such a good quality Willabeth fic in a while. And you even had J/A where Jack commits! *woot* Seriously, this fic took me on a wild ride. There were so many funny and swoon-worthy moments there are too many to list. I wanted to kill Jack over the porn incident and then I wanted to kill Will for throwing his phone in the river and leaving Elizabeth when she needed him most! But all turned out well in the end. Your epilogue was the best! I love Will in all of his fatherly glory. :D

I really hope you write another Willabeth story and soon because you are such a talented writer.

Hope to read more from you soon!

~latebloomer

thanks for this amazing story !!.. so sad it´s over!