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XxHyper ChildxX
2008-07-02 . chapter 35
*Mutters darkly* Neji's a moron.
kimiko77
2008-07-02 . chapter 35
wow she kisses him and he doesnt do anything except say "see you in a year"? gosh i really hope things work out between them. update soon!
too-much-romance
2008-03-01 . chapter 34
*laughs* How well do I know this chapter? So well. You see, the teacher's pet I told you I was tutoring for English class, well...

I knew that I had the best chance at him. We were the best of friends. But you see, he was perfect. So perfect that I felt unworthy of him. That he deserved a perfect girl. But after confessing my love to him in a subtle anime high school-ish way, AND getting rejected, I've come to realize that there are other people out there just like him, maybe better. And that I would love them, not for their level of perfection, but their perfection in MY eyes. The teacher's pet would be perfect to anyone. But...there is only one person...HIM (not saying name)...who is perfect for me. ^^

Oh, right! The story! Yeah, well, keeping out of personal matters. It was pretty good. Yup, pretty good. ^^
AnimegirlKiki
2008-01-31 . chapter 34
Kawaii...nice. lol, kiki
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2008-01-20 . chapter 28
...wow...
StarChaser37
2008-01-02 . chapter 34
Hey Holly, it's Reno. I got a fanfiction! Isn't that GREAT! Now you're all gonna have to read my stories too! jk :) Great "drabble" or whatever it's called. :)
Past the Point of Sanity
2008-01-02 . chapter 34
The thing about mistletoe, though, is no one ever decorates with it anymore... I liked this one.
too-much-romance
2007-12-22 . chapter 33
Ah, yes crack. What else can I say, but...HA! That was funny... :D Yeah. For mistakes, just look over it again. Correct what you see. Blah, blah, blah. Also, since I've been doing this to your for a while (ew, that can sound gross)...

I'd like to offer me to be your personal beta. ^^ We betas like it when we get some spotlight though, so if I do become your beta, I have to ask you to put a "Thanks to too-much-romance for correcting my work" or something like that in bold letters. ^^ It really makes it all worth while. And even if I'm not someone's personal beta, I still correct all the stories I read when I'm in the mood (which hasn't been a lot lately as you could probably tell). So, does this interest you? If so, I'll send my contract. (Heh. Contract.)
too-much-romance
2007-12-22 . chapter 32
Hehehe...Hello, Dreamer-san. It's been a while. Anywho, corrections: "because he knew the answer, wouldn’t have come over if he didn’t’" I really don't get that.

The rest, just check it over. You should find the mistakes easily. How I feel about this drabble? Eh...it's okay. That's all I'm saying.
kt
2007-12-21 . chapter 28
i love your stories! i don't know how you can improve...
...sorry...
but keep up with neji and tenten!
do you think you could do something with temari+shikamaru and/or hinata+naruto?
Please? :)
Past the Point of Sanity
2007-12-14 . chapter 33
I really enjoyed those, my favorites were 10,16,17,30, and 31!
ninjafairygirl
2007-12-10 . chapter 33
i luffed the reveiw thing, but the story was kind of confusing.
Kaori Takaguchi
2007-12-09 . chapter 33
THIS IS SO FLUFFY AND KAWAII! PLEASE WRITE MORE
hypergurl233
2007-12-09 . chapter 33
that was funny! ^^
Shins Lighter
2007-12-03 . chapter 7
I think that these are beautiful. And I know how you feel about the reviews. Even though you have 128 now, here's mine. 129. the longing is stressed in this chapter. I like that.
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