Great story! I was wondering what happened to Paul, and was kinda hoping that they would meet again so Ash could beat him up (lol) I'm kinda glad May didn't get Ash because in Ash's girl trouble she gets him and two storys in a row? I would just about crack. Good job, anyway. I liked how you apeared in both fanfics.

omg i love it!!
PaulxDawn might be cool, too. tell me when u done it tho:





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wow the suspense is killing me :3

o hellz no!

That was good

that was quick :/

Awesome :)

i liked the chapters when dawn and may were fighting for ash

I think you should do another story about how Ash came back

sorry. GREAT story bad ending

...WOW WOW WOW! that was great!

GREAT story, only one question.
What happend to Paul after he tried to rape Dawn?
Did he just leave and let Ash and Dawn be together?

i just crcked up when nurse joy thought he was a pimp
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This was a good story btw

That was a great story. I like Umbreon, why did you make Gible defeat it?!