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| Chromde 2007-10-12 ch 1,  | abuseThat was pretty, highly nostalgic. |
| Kinkatia 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseAh! I love it! It's so..so...Gah! I don't even have a word to describe it! That annoys me! |
| Kaira-chan15 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good, I loved it! Naruto and Sasuke friendships are awesome! Great job! :D |
| Streetwise 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseIf anyone needs to relax, be happy, and have fun, it's Sasuke. The poor kid expects too much of himself. And, of course, Naruto can bring out the best in him whether he wants to or not. I enjoyed the NaruHina and SakuSasu hints; if people could write it better, I think SakuSasu could become one of my favorite pairings. But it's funny how such simple, trivial things utterly fascinates us as children, but when we look back on it, it's just no big deal. Some people just grow up too fast (like Sasuke) and when you think about it, it's like you've completely missed out on something. (Sometimes I think in my rush to grow up, I forgot to have a childhood.) People say that it's never too late to be a kid again. Plenty of people view things of the past, however childish, simply for nostalgia. This story, I thought, was great. Nice work. |
| gare de lyon 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abusein my mother tongue (heehee) the word most often used for beautiful is ataahua which translates as "of the light" which fits this quite well if i do say so myself |
| StarmanHaxor 2007-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseDont listen to anyone asking you to do any yaoi or anything. I was actually surprised to see a fanfiction that had only Naruto and Sasuke in it where they DIDN'T end up making out or flirting or some dumb crap. Thanks for renewing my hope that there are writers on this site who actually post things other than PWP or Yaoi, or PWP Yaoi that are actually good. It was beautiful though, I really enjoyed it. Please continue writing. |
| NaTsUkO-ChAn 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseLove it^^ |
| Shounen-Ai 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was so beatiful! The only thing was was disappointed about was that they're wasn't any SasuNaru stuff happening. Anyway, please do keep on making these aweason one-shots please! ^-^ |