sucks, **

I came here through your work on another site that you wrote for and your work seemed so professional that I decided to follow it further. With your talent you should be a published author and many would be happy to read you books. They seem to be very creative short stories and even though I am an A/H shipper I enjoyed your stories greatly. You have captured the characters personalities wonderfully and I especially loved Foaly and Minerva. You were amazing with Holly's sense of humor. I very much enjoy your stories and if you have any books in print or short stories online I would be happy to read them.
My email address is .
Sincerely,
Jessica V.

Brilliant! Please write more!
Very good look at Minerva's feelings!

I don't think this is a bad fic.

First of all, everyone I have ever spoken to or reviewed (or read the reviews of) wants Artemis and Holly to be happily ever after together but of course with links to sequels so it just keeps going (with his body attuned to magic before he used it all up I hypothesis that he might be able to complete the ritual. In which case he and Holly actually could live normal elf lifespans together.). So keep Holly and Arty together and anyone will read it, keep them in character and finish this book even thought he sixth is already out (think alternate universe) and people will love it.

I really liked your story, and you've captured the character's personalities. Now that there's a 6th book, you should write a 7th, because Eoin Colfer isn't going to write more AF for 3 years. I definetly agree with the shipping. You should go on the AF fanfic fansite. Then you can write all you want on AF.

Good luck writing!

-computerzandbks4ver

PS: Look for me on AF fanfic! It's under the same name as the one above: computerzandbks4ever

Please update

I love plot and sadly for all you Minerva and Artemis fan she is'nt in the sixth book. (crying)

really good better than anything else i've seen

love it! heck ya keep going! whoo hoo!

Really good chapter one, (kind of) believable and a bit funny. I think you got the Eoin Colfer thing down well, but I don't imagine that Holly would ever have had/will have feelings for Artemis. I mean, he's a cold-blooded fairy exploiter, isn't he? Well, at least he USED to be. To me you got the Minerva thing right, I think she would be sorry for what she had done and be a little ashamed. I'm in full support of Artemis/Minerva too, I just couldn't imagine Artemis/Holly.

It would be perfect if FowlBook wasnt a mac.
Macs. Suck.
Crash Different. :>

Nice job with these 2stories, i like them, and im going to read your other stories...





Sincerely, "XD"

It's not that bad, though you might try to either:
1. tell it from one person's point of view
2. put diary entries (maybe on same day) for every character

Wow, this is so good. I love how you write, you keep it flowing so well!

Really good! Continue soon! I love your plot idea as well as the A/M. Normally A/H would just leave Minerva out and keep romance between Artemis and Holly. I'm really glad that you stuck to the rumors (such as setting, twin's names, and such) It makes the story all the more believable!