lolomg i love the pigtales one
and i love hakkais smile #'s they are so perfectly him

i have one word for the chapter with, without
profound
keep it up :)

"In the interest of effective time management, of course." *snorfle*

this was sweet, reminded me of eerie queerie.

"I only read the subtitles" that was priceless!

OMFG! *snoffles*

Oh my gosh, this last chapter is amazing! XD

This made me laugh every time I read it (which was several times, rereading the "good parts"). It really sounds like something Hakkai might do, and one can only wonder exactly what he told the bar owners that made them so eager to obey him...

All the chapters were great, keep it up! ^__^

Oh, for some reason, this chapter really made my heart ache. I'm a big fan of 10k, and the disorientation and loss that your Hakkai experienced upon waking was just perfect. Beautifully done, thank you so much for sharing this! 19 and 5 have to be my favourite so far, will continue reading!

Really great chapter - I love how you've characterized Hakkai throughout this entire fanfic.

Do you have a link to moonsilver's "Five Minutes"? I was unable to find it... ^_^;;

Well, i suppose a drunk Gojyo can't beat a sober Gojyo in terms of molestation. (God, is that even a proper term?)

w.o.w.

the Mona Lisa of fanfiction. the Micheal Phelphs of creative writing. the Eiffel Tower of inspired creation.

you, i dare say, are the true capturer of Hakkai's persona...you use him to describe in great accuracy, the ways of Gojyo...how you did this, i do not know.

eloquent, beautiful, timeless, masterful, and ironic to say, but perfect.

w.o.w.

keep writin...like seriously

oh how sad...this is so sweetingly sorrowful

Hakkai stuck on Kanan and he just can't let her go...just not the type and Gojyo is hurt that he still thinks of her...he's sorta 2nd when Kai's sleepin

just so sad...n neither of them can really help it either...oh the multi loves of human beings

again, brilliance in digital form

keep writin

wow...i just love this.

Oh Hakkai...even when he's like this, he's still got his cool on...Gojyo picked a good one (ha ha)

keep writin

Yay!

I always love your updates. I can completely see Hakkai doing that. XD

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This just proves Hakkai is horny as hell. Very devious planning, though, I must say.