Please Write another one!

this is such a good story! are you ever going to continue it?

... Read the rap. What's wrong with Zac's hair? I read better raps from fifth graders. Do us a favor and go back to fifth grade.

Overall, your story is good. B+

OMG that was so sad. It made my eyes water up at the end.
I never really liked 'Jashley' anyways so yeah.
It's weird but I like 'Drashley' better.
It was a good one-shot though :D

o m g Pennia & Yeshii! awesome story!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!

JASHLEY FOREVER! haha =P
LOVE IT XD

You guys are AWESOMME!

OMG!OMG!that was the greates story eva!!except it makes me wanna cry!!..poor zaccy!..im so sad!...thanks,u made me hate jared now!..lmao..just kiddin'!...aww...zashley will always rise..lol.i wonder if thats really happenin' w/zanessa..i bet it is.its just publicity!

Hey dudes!

YAY! AN AWESOME JASHLEY!
*happy dances*
Ooh…Jared and Ash were doing something dirty at the end……DID YOU WARN MY DAUGHTER?

LOL

YAYIES! ZANESSA IS A PR STUNT!
*claps hands and happy dances more*
WHOO! This is fun!
*starts happy dancing chain of people*

LOL
Update soon, dudes!

Love you guys so much!

Princess Catie. Yes that IS my name.
LOL
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Aww, poor Zac-i-poo.
I

Pennia & Yeshi,

:O

my liking for jashley has decreased.
lemme just swtich jared and zac's names around.

BWAHAHAHA! ROFL, that's soo sad!!

):
i love zac.
he's my love.
ROFL.

that's so sadd!
urgh.

i loved it though.

xoxox
Christy

This was great, you two! Both of you are such great writers, and together! That's like YAY! I love this now. I'm gonna add it to my favourites, 'cause Jashley rules! They're the best :)
I loved this, well done!

aw poor zac ha its what u get u ** lol oo american word hehe anway yayy jashleyy lives oh yeah oo yeah lol and oo its getting steamy lol update soon cant wait to read more update soon love yhoos XXD :)

A M Y L O U J A Y Y

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wzup luvied this oneshot Jashley is cute n w/ zac n v broken up ( hopefully) zac should feel bad he broke itt off with the most greatest girl in the world for him Zashley was hott but oh well. hehe i'm mean i know!

lubbies Marri :)