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Faitily-Yours
2009-12-10 . chapter 10
Okay- New reader here.

Holy shit- like...wow. I could almost drop dead here. Okay, so Sasuke... he's an interesting one. I've never seen him so fan-girl like and lovey-dovey it's... kinda of scary haha

At times when Naruto was all 'What's this!? Hot gf for meh!? Sasuke~! You should check out her rack! it's so beautiful!' - so basically indulging in the female race while Sasuke sat brokenhearted listening to Naruto confess his love I wanted Sasuke to just stand up and walk out. To punch Naru-chan in the gut and walk away. If Sasuke was as important to Naru as Naru says he is- dearest Naru-chan would run like the wind and yell for forgivness offering his sexy ass to whatever pounding it may dutifully receive by the all might Uchiha overlord. -May Sasuke's ultimate reign last long-

It just seems that... that's always what I want. I want Naruto to realize and go after a man so deeply in love with HIM as the kind of person he needs to love him... that... person.. is? Did that make sense? I don't really think so...

But Sasuke should kick ass, take names, and not wait to commit serial murder. The End.

P.S.- Hinata should fall deeply in love with Kiba now. He's too kind and cute for his own good.
slyswn28
2009-12-09 . chapter 10
try as hard as I might I just can't bring myself to hating these super crazed fangirls (namely Ino) strange no matter how much she irks me with her shameless behavior, at the same time I almost almost sympathize with her. And Hinata, the way you write her it's like she doesn't have one bitchy bone in her body. While I'm not fond of the girl she's rather cute in this story.

As for Sasuke, well he amused me greatly in this chapter, actually throughout the whole story the lengths that he's goes to in order to get what he wants is something I wish I'd see in more fics.

These days, well, let's just say to put it quite simply, I look forward to updates from authors like you.

'Course you've always had a way with writing Sasuke in particular. It is what drew me to you stories years back.

And I for one am pleased to see you that haven't abandoned the fanfic world.

I hate it when a great author just up and disappears.

Don't fade away!

=)
Random Reviewer
2009-12-08 . chapter 10
I am one of those reviewers you probably hate, because I almost never review... but I really wanted to comment about this last chapter and some other person's review before mine. She said something about not liking how Sasuke and Naruto got together because it was really a shock. But I think she totally missed the point because I think it's supposed to be a shock and that's why it happened and WHY it makes SENSE. Naruto obviously has issues with his homosexuality when there always was chemistry between him and Sasuke since the moment they met. And now Naruto is rushing into a relationship that he doesn't really understand and it shocks him as well. So it would have been weird and the tone totally wrong if that part was slow, romantic, or what have you.

I agree the smut could have been drawn out more, but that's partly because I'm a perv and like lots of smut. But I read a lot of your stuff and know you don't write smut usually, which is fine with me. I don't read your fic for smut. I come for the dynamics and I understand it. So I want to stress: please don't slow down your pace. I like how you deliver some big event in every chapter and would hate for you to think that at least some of us readers don't understand it or appreciate it.

Also, I love Ino in this fic. Which is weird because I usually can't stand her. I like how she acts tough, like saying mean things to Naruto and complaining about the sex, when she really seems to like Naruto. And that makes her love for him more... pure? I don't know. In the past chapters, I wasn't so sure whether she liked him or was just dating him because he's famous but this chapter makes me feel so divided about her!

Not that I want Naruto to end up with Ino. I really want him to end up with Itachi. That's right. You heard me correctly. Itachi. In the last chapter, he gave me the creeps in a good way. And Sasuke kind of needs to be put into his place. He's always underestimating Naruto. Which reminds me: I love how Naruto isn't just a goody two shoes in this fic. He's a good guy, because Naruto is always a good guy, but he has had a hard life and I like how he's not sunshine all the time. Plus, he's a rock star. The fact that Sasuke expected him to be a virgin means that Sasuke knows nothing about rock stars or Naruto.

Anyway, this is a long review. But I wanted to make up for all the ones I never wrote. So please read this and please don't slow down the pace like that other person said and please update!
Chonki
2009-12-08 . chapter 10
ROSESAREBLUE! You are back, at long last, with a new chapter!

Okay, so i finished reading chapter ten? And I've got to say, I have mixed feelings for this thing. Why? Well let me start with the good parts.

I think it's great that Naruto and Sasuke get together and are doing the dirty regularly and in school closets. I also think that it's cute that Hinata and Sakura found this CD of Naruto's parents when they were in high school.

BUT!

I think you took no time at all to develop or at least build up to the point where Naruto and Sasuke would finally get together like they did. I mean, it just... happened. suddenly. Honestly, I was really shocked.

Also, the stress in the relationship between Naruto and Ino cannot be simply described sufficiently with them not being able to do the nasty. I feel that there should be other factors that need to be taken into consideration when writing about these kinds of things.

The smut was so-so.

I think you went a little too fast with this chapter.

Sorry, but it seems the bad outweigh the good. But I'm sure you'll find a way to bounce back with some really good improvements!

~Chonki
cadywise
2009-12-08 . chapter 10
LOVE IT! Bout time Sasuke spoke up. Naruto obviously wasn't taking the hint. LOL Well Sasuke there goes your perfect innocent image of naru must say I'm just as surprised as u are.
Keep it up. Can't wait for more.
Rubber tomato ALRIGHT!
B.A Victoria
2009-12-08 . chapter 10
awesome! PLEASE UPDATE SOON YOU ARE DOING GREAT!
chintsuuzai
2009-12-08 . chapter 10
I have absolutely nothing creative to say so I'll just say what i always say: I love you, I love this fic and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter \o/
KatrinaEagle
2009-12-07 . chapter 10
LOL WTF.

This is epic win, man!

Can't wait till chapter 11 come out.

8DD

Oh, what wiill Sasuke do~ (sing song voice)
AuraofaGirl
2009-12-07 . chapter 3
lol my love for you knows no bounds right now and it's only the third chapterXD
Aki WildQueen
2009-12-07 . chapter 10
Wow! We finally have some SasuNaru smut! ^_^
I feel sorry for Ino (not enough for her to go back with Naruto however) but I'm a complete SasuNaru fan. And a NejGaa fan too. hint hint! XD
Mr. Bunny and I hope you update again soon!
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sasunaru8080
2009-12-07 . chapter 10
OH! I LOVE IT! so excited to see wat happens nxt! awesome cahppie cant wait 4 da nxt one! YAYAYYAYAY!
cheesiecrackers
2009-12-07 . chapter 10
Oh. My. God.
You. YOu. YOU.
<3 (no homo)
I absolutely adore your stories; the humor and the writing style and just, everything (total ego boost). Though I was rather disappointed that Naruto-kun is quite the whore, the fact that this instigated some hot male butt-sex made up for it.

Anyways, keep up the amazing work! Take your time with the updates, I know how stressful life can get, but please don't drop any of your stories, they're absolutely... divine (for lack of a better adjective).

Oh, and it'd be great if you could just, I don't know, kill off Ino (and that's Yamanaka Ino) the next chapter. Thank you! : )
sukenarufan09
2009-12-07 . chapter 10
I'm so glad you updated!! I love this fic and was so anxious to see what would happen with Naru and Sasuke...can we see some yummy Gaara soon, maybe he can take an interest in guy Sasuke and make Naruto jelous enough to get his head out of his a$$, and give up the whole Ino, Temari thing...Ugh...
RMT
2009-12-07 . chapter 9
REALLY??! "LIKE BROTHERS"?! I love Naruto and all, but WTF? "Taking a bath together?" Sasuke's gonna die from blood loss after that nosebleed. Itachi probably already died after that little kiss on the cheek. XD
If Sasuke ever meets Gaara, there will be major ass-whipping...
arelando
2009-12-07 . chapter 10
i freaking love this i cant wait until the next chapter and by the way when is gaara coming into the picture so he can make sasuke very very jealous and possessive.
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