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A Heart of Blades 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuselol, I really liked this. In a weird way I could see it happening, but not really, lol. Great job and all in all they seemed in charecter
Deep Metal 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abuseThis was definitely an interesting tale. I'm not quite sure how I feel about it yet, considering it is a crack pairing. It was well-written though. What I found interesting was how Inferno was able to resist her for the most part. It was strange how he leaned down and kissed her but it wasn't an unwelcome plot point. It was pretty in-character how she slapped him for it, though. I also liked how you brought up Inferno remembering how Blackarachnia said she was a "friend" to the Royalty/Megatron. And how you also followed up on that by having Inferno telling her that she certainly doesn't act like a "friend" to the Royalty. Anyways, well-written and nicely done plot. I'm still unsure, though, on what to think about Blackarachnia/Inferno.
Vedda 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abuseSo, i fell in other or your fics not looking for. Nice pairing, nice fight and nice Inferno!!
freefall-gypsy 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abusegreat pairing i love it hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Lady-night-shade04 2007-07-24 ch 1,	abuseThis story was great. I had never thought of this pairing at all. I like your stories a lot. This one is one of my favorites for this section.
acid 2007-07-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseHeh. Hehe. BWHAAHAHAHA! You are so awesome it hurts! Pure crack, bravo!
Mastermind Sphinx 2007-06-28 ch 1,	abuseI like the concept, even if it was inspired by a weird dream, and a lot of the dialogue is very in character. Your characterization of Blackarachnia was quite nice, especially. =) My critique would be to either more carefully spellcheck and proof-read your work or to get a beta reader, for there were a lot of typos and verb/tense agreement errors.
ohmygiddyaunt 2007-06-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseThe best thing about this story was that I could actually hear the characters saying the lines in my head...which was really, really hilarious! I laughed out loud several times, and am still grinning like an idiot. Inferno was always hilarious, but with BA working on him, his spasticity becomes even more apparent! What really surprised me was that he actually got some of his own back. Great job, especially for an unusual pairing!
Seiberwing 2007-06-28 ch 1,	abuseNot quite sure what to think about this. Inferno definitely seems in character up until Blackarachnia started going after him. Then it got a bit weird. "Oh stop it! she scolded herself. Why shouldn't you do it? He expects you to anyway. Why disappoint him now? She stopped. Maybe that was it. He was expecting her to do it. Almost as if he were looking for a reason to whine about her to Megatron. Well she didn't need him whining. She had had enough of that for now." I like this. Traditional Predacon 'outthinking yourself'. . "I thought only the female of your species worked. The males were only useful for one thing." she put her hands behind her back while looking into the air. "Mating." Which means, technically, that Inferno's beast mode is female, as "he" is a warrior ant. If he was a drone, he'd probably sit inside all day and attempt to lay Megatron, who is the leader of the colony and thus by default a female. ...of course, he called Rampage a drone once, so I don't think I want to think about what that would mean.

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