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Kingkakashi
2009-10-27 . chapter 20
This is really an amazing story! I hope you haven't abandoned it and will post an update for it soon?
Hi Hikari No Kaze
2009-10-01 . chapter 20
the story is gre...EXCELLENT!I like the way it goes especially the omake.Will Sasuke join Naruto Village.Is the poll for the 4th still on?I want the 4th to be alive bu for good reason too.Like Orochimaru reviving him then Naruto do something to free him.
Anyway that's my opinion if it'll end with him dead it's OK.
Good Luck Keep It Up,
'Till Next Time
Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-31 . chapter 20
Question the name of the clan it's the clan of Naruto right? If it is why don't you name it after Naruto's bloodline?

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-31 . chapter 19
Awsomeness.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-31 . chapter 18
I'm thinking of the Neko Anbu. She was the purple haired one I think. ANd her name started with a Y. Can't think of her name but I know it started with a Y.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-31 . chapter 17
And the ninjaness continues.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-31 . chapter 16
For some reason I keep thinking of kareoke. I think that would be awsome to read in this fic.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-31 . chapter 15
I am here. I am waiting.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-31 . chapter 14
Can't wait for more. It was a funny chapter.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-30 . chapter 13
My friend your writing is awsome. I love this fic of yours and can't wait to read more.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-30 . chapter 12
Man I thought that he would ask Sasuke. But I guess he's still pissed at him.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-30 . chapter 11
Man this is getting better and better.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-30 . chapter 10
And what they don't know is that Naruto got kicked out of the village and Hinata joined him and they're at Suna. Iditos. But that's whay we love them.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-30 . chapter 9
Loved the last part between Itachi and Kisame.

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Shizuka Taiyou
2009-08-29 . chapter 8
This keeps getting better by the chapter.

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