What a great premise for Kagura and Kyou. I like the fact that you made Kagura stay strong and how you turned it around in the end. Really great read. Would love to read a sequel.

Brava!

Kagura is one of my favorite Furuba characters as well (first one's Uo! _) and I liked how you portrayed her in this story. The reversal in roles was refreshing and it makes me wonder what Kyo will do without her in his life. Kudos to you for giving Kagura a strong will. *_*

Signed,

Princess Miyazawa

Very smart! I think that the way you portrayed Kagura's serious side, not just her immature style, really did strengthen the story. If she just gave in, it would not have been as good.

As Ayame says, "You have my praise!"

-Hana