great.

loved it

I actually saw this on the live journal, but I'm not familiar enough with that format, so I came here to leave a review. I just loved this story. This is probably one of my favorites. Although I didn't understand why he didn't want her to change her shoes! LOL!!

Great reminder of a lot of important things in their lives together. Very sweet. I liked that she saw them hiding in the closet watching her search the room. I also like that everything didn't immediately go smoothly. The fake out box - priceless.

Except I kept thinking that the first clue was given to Jimmy. And well in it Clark admits to catching the bullet. What if Jimmy had snuck a peak because he was curious, and discovered something about Clark that he hadn't already known? Hm? Follow up story??

Rhea

Aw! So sweet! Beautifully written! I loved every word of it!

{“Aren’t you on the clock?”

“Aren’t you supposed to be at home?”} *snort*

OOH! And adventure! *rubs palms together* But he could've just left her that note at home. Oh, but then where's the fun in that?

{Noting familiar really jogged her memory. She couldn’t even remember what they were doing.} Well it was about 7, 8 years beforehand. And oh, typo.

LUNCH!! I really need to read that one again. Heartstrings!

{“Lunch not over! Crowd coming in! Eat food or go home for food there!”} LOL

Clark's notes are funny.

Dang, a pair of twenties. That's a lot of cab fare.

{She rolled her eyes. Inside was another note.

{“Oh my God…” she groaned. She nearly put the top back on and threw it at the house, hoping he would suddenly swoop down in front of her so that it would smack into his spit-curled head.}haha, One of the reasons I love Lois so much. Her inner dialogue is my inner dialogue.

hehe, Clark's notes are funny. And he's got a point.

Jason and Clark hiding behind the blinds? Now that's just too cute, lol

Maybe the note's by the record player?

No, Jason, don't spoil the fun!

{M.J. Clark} *snicker*

{Here’s your fifth and final clue – we met here, I fell in love here, and you told me the world didn’t need a savior.} Aw. I love your clues.

Lois deserves a foot rub after all of this!
And why is she putting the heels back on? Keep em off, girl!

*waps Lois* THE ROOF!

{“Lois,” he said quietly, in that voice he reserved only for her. “I have a question to ask you.”} GAH! I hate how end your stories!! I know we know how it ends so you don't really need to write it, but, would it KILL you to do it anyway! I NEED IT!!

*content sigh* Great job, as always. Nothing like a lil adventure to start your day, even if it is in the middle of the day.

Sorry to hear about your family circumstances, and I hope that everything goes well.

OMG!! *Hyperventilating* Evil, evil, evil, EVIL!! Update ASAP!

Great story!! I loved reading it!!

Very good, can't wait to see what you write in the next chapter.

That was absolutely adorable! I loved it! I even loved how you incorporated little aspects from "Superman Returns" in there! You captured everyone so well, Lois' tone, Clark's gestures, Jason's childish-ness...it was really well done. Now I can't wait to read your next story!

Wonderful story, and a great fun scavenger hunt to boot! Congratulations to you, and to Lois and Clark!

oh! no you don't you give me one more chapter.

Yeah - I get to be the first review here . .I'm sure you won't mind if I copy from LJ:

*sigh*

Really, all I can say is that was a perfect CLOIS moment

totally perfect thanks for writing.

No other words will due. . .8-)