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Reviews For: The Art of Deception

KoumiLoccness
2007-11-05
ch 7,
abuseNice chap mon... Peaceout then cuz... Koumi/Sorato foe Life! G...
Yamora Love n Friendship
2007-11-05
ch 7,
abusegood chapter poor sora she can't find her friend, and she found out she was fired. well can't wait for the next chapter.
Yamora Love n Friendship
2007-09-22
ch 6,
abusehey great now he and sora need to leave or just lay really low can't wait for the next 2 chapters. ^-^
Yamora Love n Friendship
2007-09-08
ch 5,
abusehey i liked it i thought it was cool well i can't wait for the next one
TheWitchLady
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abuseYou have really good writting skills, I admire that! Good work!
KoumiLoccness
2007-09-06
ch 5,
abuseCoo G... Peaceout then yo...
Yamora Love n Friendship
2007-09-02
ch 4,
abusegreat story i liked i got pulled in and i wanted toknow what happens next so plz write more. ^-^
KoumiLoccness
2007-08-01
ch 4,
abuseFasho cuz! Sorato foe Life G I got ur bacc like alwayz Peaceout then Koumi/Sorato2 the Fullest Yo..
SallyGirl
2007-07-25
ch 3,
abuseReally good chapter. It was satisfying to look into their history and see how deep the relationship between yamato and sora is. I loved that although this chapter had a more serious tone, you still brought some humor in the end.

"Although, one did look pretty suspicious watering a few plants in front of a store."

love the humor, the writing, and the story!
theladyknight
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseShe watched a few co-workers frown as they began to whisper to one another. Don’t tell me they’re questioning if I’m a male!

Haha...I love sarcasm. The world would be so much more depressing and boring without it.

Yes, it was he against the world, but now Sora was now by his side. Things suddenly did not seem so black and white. He found himself sitting above her head, his ribcage no longer in pain.

I like where this is going already, though I honestly don't know where it's going. Clearly Yamato has a dangerous job and clearly Sora is partner number...100ish? lol. I have a feeling things'll be revealed.

As a side note, it's good to hear from you again. It's been quite some time, hasn't it?
SallyGirl
2007-07-18
ch 2,
abuseThis story is so intriguing, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really curious to see how this story will turn out, because I'm trying to figure out what's going on. I love the interaction with Sora and Yamato, and how their characters are portrayed. paranoia's great fun to read about.
KoumiLoccness
2007-07-14
ch 2,
abuseNice chap G! Peaceout cuz Koumi/Sorato4Life lol U owe me one...
KoumiLoccness
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseYeah G Sorato foe Life!! Peace then Koumi Fan Out...
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