 TiffanySawyer 2007-06-29 . chapter 1 I love your stories. They are very well written. They have excellent grammar,a great plot,and you know when enough is enough(you don't drag things out). This is just me,(and I don't mean to sound snobbish) but when I read stories that well, aren't from people with at least a LITTLE bit of experience I always correct things in my head on how it should have been done, on why in the world a character would act like that, on the originality of it and, of course, on the grammar. But for you, it's a completely different story and I appreciate your effort. Please don't take this as a downright bashing of some authors. I really appreciate them writing and I know that with time and prectice they'll get better. So if anything please take this as a 'you rock my socks!' compliment rather than a snobbish 'I've seen worse'. Yeah. I hope you are into the whole long review thing. -TS |
 SecretBox 2007-06-29 . chapter 1Oh. Wow. That was amazingly well-written. You had me on the edge of my seat here! I was so scared Yuffie was going to die, but then when I realized it was Yuffie :warning: Aerith I nearly went insane! It's a good thing Squall was there to protect her. I smiled at the ending, the whole 'not being cold anymore' thing was really symbolic and sweet. Ohho. That's it, I have definitely been inspired to write a Squarith! Keep up the awesome work! :] |