Awww!

practicing drowning, eh? sounds like something Gai would do.

aww that was cute, good job. :)

I'm not sure what I was expecting when I clicked on your story, but that wasn't it. That was incredible, and you should be proud of your work. Short and to the point, but powerful at the same time.

Stay Frosty...

- Nikolai

Absolutely adorable. I loved your almost simplistic approach to the dialogue. The opening line is wonderful; I think the only negative in the sentence right after. It just doesn't flow quite as nicely and I don't think you need to try so hard to explain away the stunning opening line.

Overall, good job. :)

The boys really are rather protective of their youthful flower

That was made of pure sweetness.

I love Team Gai, they're absolutely adorable and lethal together. This was very well done, I think, the contest for the longest held breath under the water was fun and I liked how you included Tenten's constant dislike to be restrained under the water. And it was a particularly nice touch when Neji and Lee joined her, not alone anymore.

:) :) :) I love friendship stories. They make me feel so warm and happy and buttery/gooey/delicious. Especially when they're written as well as this one! I really love how you portray the team dynamics. And plus, the tiny hint of Nejiten was irresitable :D

Aww that was really sweet! Great Team Gai fic :)

awwwwwwwwwww how sweet of neji

Loved the theme & great tie with the events of the actual story! Well done!

cute:)

Probably the CUTEST Team Gai story I have ever read! And gahhh the little NejiTen fluffy made me all fuzzy :)

LOVE IT!

Go team Gai! Especially nejiten. Hehe