aw so sweet loved it.

that was beautiful team bonding. :) Tenten's analyzation of the water and her body was so cute, cause it's true! love this adorable team, and their fic. ;)

Incredibly sweet. ^^

Keep up the amazing work!

One of the best Team Gai one shots I've read.

Except..where was Gai? lol

Absolutely brilliant. After the water prison incident, it makes sense that Team Gai would have this kind of training. I loved it :)

I'm dying here. You killed me and I'm dying. This was just maximum sweet overload, and I adored it. The last line, the concept, the characterizations . . . loved it loved it loved it.

aww! what a cute ending!
kawai

I really enjoyed this, not so much for the omg-team-luv part (although yes, I love that too), but more for the very real portrayal of slightly irrational yet justified fear. I like how you managed to show that Tenten was not afraid of the water so much as she was afraid of being, as you put it, "being at the mercy of her own body."

Good story. Faving.

Aww, that was cute. It was fluff, but without the romance. It's always to see those heartwarming team-bonding fics. :]
Great job!

aww i loved the ending it was soo cute

awws... kawaii AWESOMENESS!! 'none of us are alone..' cute!! :D

~Dreaming101

very heartwarming

AW!
That was TOO CUTE!
TEAM GAI IS THE SUGAR THE HONEY AND THE TEA!

Absolutely amazing.

you have a really cool writing style...I think it might be in a different tense but it really makes the story different!