Please continue with the revenge! :)

Not bad. Yes, it's probably a bit overused, but I think you fit the song in wonderfully.

And I, for one, would love to see what Satoshi and Risa have planned for Takeshi. *Smirks*

Great Job!

I think this is a very cute and clever one shot! I saw the Lion King as a kid a long time ago. I can't believe its been so long! But I love your story; it was brilliant and funny!

I've read this long before I wrote my first fic, and I loved it. I'm glad I had this chance to tell you that.:)

I can't imagine what cruel fate is to befall Saehara, but it's well deserved by an intruder, right?

haha.. just kidding!

Anyway, great story! I love the sweet SatoshixRisa moments you've created there. Write on! Bless ya!

this is cool.

hope u write Satoshi and Risa’s revenge.

This story was Great! I loved it and how you used the song "Can you feel the love tonight" to relate to the story. It made me want to listen to the song as well. This was a great story!

I think this is a really good start. I think you should definetly consider continuing it.

Cuteness!

oh please, do write the part where Takeshi gets his butt kicked by Satoshi and Risa. I would toatlly read that because it would be so funny. any Takeshi beating is hilarious.

Loved it. The word really do match.

Sweet and funny too. Takeshi is so dead once caught, I can imagine Risa beating him up while satoshi tries to stop his now "Girlfriend" Nyahaha.

Oh ho, the idea of Satoshi and Risa's revenge D

I thought it was a pretty nice oneshot. The Lion King allusion was rather ingenius too.

i'll write you a one-shot if you write us that sequel. i love this...as always -;