That was totally adorable!^^ <3

2 cute! Dally must be happy getting a cookie. Hey! I want a cookie too!

This was one of the cutest stories I have ever read. I loved it. I wonder what would happen if the whole gang were involved. I bet it would be the cutest story ever.

if i beg for u to write more to this would u? lol i mean u could show them growin up or somethin an how they go through things like pony's parents diein an the church an everythin, pretty please?!

aw how cute.

aww i luv it!

omg..tht was so cute..i luved it

D'aaw. Wow, that was maddeningly cute. Good job!

*takes a breath* Aw... makes you all warm and fuzzy inside... *grins*

Aww...I loved it, so cute

that is the sweetest story ever i hope you write more to this i would love to read more with dally and pony you don't find many and never when there that young anyway i love it!!

little ponyboy so cute!

that was good

That was adorable :) I love when people write stories about the little greasers, it creates the fuzz effect :P

oh thats so cute! i will be on the look out for the next chapters!