Awesome!!♥XD

So KAWAI!

i less then 3 your story

omg, i love your writing style, and how every now and then you wouuld talk out through the narration.

oh, and the make-out scene was teh shmexx. XD

omg that was so cute and awesome!

sorry that my review is so short and lacking proper punctuation.

I loved this! If this is what you write with writers block then with your muse must be amazing! I really admire your style! :D

LOL! This is so funny and cute! I loved it!

hm...this story makes me wonder...*wonders how Light and L get dressed with the chains on*

This was pure genius. Seriously.

i love this story!! esspecially the part where Light says "because if you don't then you'll get skin cancer and die." lol

I liked it. You're a very entertaining writer. There were several parts (comrade, homophobes with sniper rifles, etc.) that made me crack up. Really nice. One of the ones I'll go back and read agin when I get bored and have run out of Light x L (T.T)

aww... the ending was utterly sweet.. ^^

Hahah, well, I liked the light hearted humor in the story. I loved how you broke up the make-out scene with humorous coments, that was funny and unique. Your coments in the whole story were actually what made it so great, haha. So, as for you not having and humor... I must disagree.
Well, I loved it.
TTYL
Creep

aw so cute

Very cute. :)