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| Miss Lavender Sky 2008-08-28 ch 3,  | abuseOh my gosh, oh my gosh, I loved it! Yay! That was a great ending, and it was so cute! :) |
| notyour-sunbeam 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseGreat story! |
| debbie325 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseYay for happy endings! Hyde needed a little drama to come to his senses about Jackie. But he sure came through big time. Carrying her out of the store, being all worried and finally asking her to marry him. I loved it. I hope you continue with this happy universe from time to time. :) |
| etFated 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseI loved the ending! That was perfect! Wonderful! |
| casdon 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseI really loved this story- so sweet and funny. I hope you have a follow-up planned...? |
| sometimestheycallmejackie 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseAwe that was so cute. He saved her and made her dreams come true. Great story! |
| Zeppleingirl08 2007-07-09 ch 3, | abuseyay! a happy ending! i loved this story! great job! |
| kayjay 2007-07-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseThe end? sniff...sniff... That was so sweet and beautiful and right. Great story! |
| Zenkindoflove 2007-07-08 ch 3, | abuseThis was a beautiful final chapter, heather. I absolutely loved it. I thought it was a little amusing that Hyde was staring in Jackie's car noticing the lingerie she bought. Even though it was a very stressful situation, thinking something like that is real, you know? Anything to get your mind off of the horrible reality that was happening. Man, I was so scared when Hyde wanted to charge that store. I was afraid that he was going to get shot or something, but luckily the cop stopped him. But then he charged the store anyways! Lol... the way Jackie described it, it was romantic though. Hehe, and then a cop bitched him out. Picturing a cop scolding him is funny in my head. I'm kind of picturing a younger Red Forman character. And he proposed! That was one of the best proposals I have ever read. It was beautiful and so very Hyde. It's hard to make Hyde give a decent, romantic proposal with still being in character but you suceeded milady.. and wonderfully at that. Oh! They're so happy, and now they are going to have happy post-proposal sex. This was an amazing story, heather. Just awesome! |
| SpooK 2007-07-08 ch 3, | abuseaw i loved it!! awesome story |
| sometimestheycallmejackie 2007-07-06 ch 2, | abuseah that'll get him to admit that he wants to marry her. Damn straight it will. Great job. |
| casdon 2007-07-06 ch 2, | abuseI am LOVING this!! Just LOVING it! |
| debbie325 2007-07-05 ch 2, | abuseI was getting so annoyed at Hyde. Why wouldn't he marry her? He loves her, they already act like they're married, what would be so different. I was glad Eric and Donna were wondering the same thing. But then you added how he was thinking of how all their parents marriages didn't work out. He needs a little faith. But then the ending. Omg! I'm gonna be on the edge of my seat till you update. |
| davina 2007-07-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseawesome i want more. but please dont make it too dark, i love the tone so far. i like it like this! can't wait for the next chapter! |
| notyour-sunbeam 2007-07-05 ch 2, | abuseOH! I love the angst. I have been really enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. |